Three fics on the Pit. I made the mistake of looking at the favourite fic lists of authors I really enjoy. And found three damned fics in the SAME day pulling the SAME crap by different people.
The last straw was a FANTASTIC scene with Yumichika Domming Shinji and Ikkaku. At the end of the scene, Shinji is asleep (sleep apparently equals after care) and Ikkaku asks if they should stay (it's Shinji's place and he lives alone). Yumi says "No. He's a big boy, he'll be fine." And then they LEAVE.
As you might have noticed, I was a bit peeved.
I'm thinking I've calmed down enough that I can leave a constructive comment on that fic now.
I'm going to sound like a total noob, but...what is the Pit?
I wouldn't have thought twice about the fic hehe since I know absolutely nothing about the etiquette and rules in the culture. Definitely learned something new from your post. :)
Naw, it's fine :) I did a double take the fist time I saw the term used. It refers to Fanfiction. Net.
Heh *bows* I am educational!
When was.... 10? My father told me to write what I know. I had that pounded into my head for 13 years.
So when I decided I wanted to write stories with fight scenes, I took up martial arts. And when I wanted to try my hand at writing BDSM I looked around and got involved with the local community. It was eye opening on a lot of levels ~_^
Some folks will mention how the real power in the relationship is the sub, but they don't tell you WHY. And while that statement is true, that power exchange is far more complicated than it just being in the hands one person.
Anyhow, I think I've rambled enough. But if you have questions, feel free to ask.
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The last straw was a FANTASTIC scene with Yumichika Domming Shinji and Ikkaku. At the end of the scene, Shinji is asleep (sleep apparently equals after care) and Ikkaku asks if they should stay (it's Shinji's place and he lives alone). Yumi says "No. He's a big boy, he'll be fine." And then they LEAVE.
As you might have noticed, I was a bit peeved.
I'm thinking I've calmed down enough that I can leave a constructive comment on that fic now.
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I wouldn't have thought twice about the fic hehe since I know absolutely nothing about the etiquette and rules in the culture. Definitely learned something new from your post. :)
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Heh *bows* I am educational!
When was.... 10? My father told me to write what I know. I had that pounded into my head for 13 years.
So when I decided I wanted to write stories with fight scenes, I took up martial arts. And when I wanted to try my hand at writing BDSM I looked around and got involved with the local community. It was eye opening on a lot of levels ~_^
Some folks will mention how the real power in the relationship is the sub, but they don't tell you WHY. And while that statement is true, that power exchange is far more complicated than it just being in the hands one person.
Anyhow, I think I've rambled enough. But if you have questions, feel free to ask.
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