Feb Week 1 Prompt: Beat

[aisling87]

I opened my bag
                                                Out fell confetti and smells
                                                Latin Memories

Comments

[mullvaney]

Gorgeous use of language. "spin and stop in spicy spirograph patterns." That, that is awesome!

[aisling87]

:) Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it. I had a lot of inspiration to draw from.

[merthin]

Exquisite, as always. :-)

[aisling87]

Thank you, sir. ;)

[wierdauntie]

I want to go there too! ANd dance and spin!

[aisling87]

It was truly beautiful! I can't wait to go back!

[desert_rose]

Hi there

[aisling87]

Thank you very much for your thoughtful edits! I truly appreciate it. I just have one question:

this can be done by leaving a blank line between the last line and the first line of the main part of the piece.

On my screen, I do have a space between the poem and the prose. I've had problems before with lj changing my formatting, but I'm not sure what to do about it. When you look at the screen is there no space there?

Thank you again for your edit and kind words. :)

[desert_rose]

I've had the same problems with LJ removing lines, too. The only way I've found around it is to put a blank line, plus a "" there, which then inserts one blank line.

I also just realized that your poem is haiku poetry, whyich I love, but find so hard to write. Very nicely done, and so beautiful, too!

[____hejira]

Good piece. I like your use of color. Good luck.

[aisling87]

:) Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.