FIC: Drabbles, fifth and last batch

[aillil]

Thanks go to the lovely moondagny for betaing these. *hugs*

for the_dark_twin
Sirius and Lucius
dark!fic
PG-13 for innuendo I think
581 words
This, um, got a little out of hand length-wise.
Plus, this got turned into a 6-page comic strip by the wonderful remeciel. See here.

Comments

[remeciel]

You're not used to writing dark fics? Well, the 1st drabble proves you were wrong, love. :)

I particuarly love the way Lucius's hints when he talked to Sirius.
And the way you managed to introduce the Black Family is amazing. This is a drabble, and it's like the reader almost knows who is who perfectly. -- though I have no idea who Aunt Lucretia is. Wonderful.

The Grimmauld Place irregulars, I dare say,"
.... is the sentence I prefer.
And the last sentencefrom Bellatrix is exactly what someone could expect from her. *shivers*
This ambiance in this drabble is really.... well, I've got frayed nerves, to tell the truth. ;)

And the two last ones! plenty of Remus and Sirius again! *sighs of happiness*. You have to thank your muse, or inspiration --or whatever you may call itbecause, really, these drabbles are so beautiful, too.

"Has to happen at some point, doesn't it?"

"What d'you think you're doing, Black?" he growled, biting his shoulder. "Bloody tease, you are."Am not good at expressing myself. Well... but I have to say I'm

[aillil]

Thank you, dear, for both reading and leaving such a lovely comment. I'm happy they worked so well for you.

Aunt Lucretia? She shows up on the Black Family Tree. She's the sister of Sirius' father. And a comic strip... *sighs with happiness*

[remeciel]

You're welcome, love. :)

She's the sister of Sirius' father.
That does sound strange. Really strange. Don't ask me why though.
Oh yeah, a comic strip. Definitely. *g*

[lyras]

Nice to see a slightly happier conclusion to 'Converting Sirius' than the original! The last one made me smile, and I agree with Remeciel that Bella's closing line in the first drabble is chilling and horrible - just like her.

Hope you have a lovely few days away!

[aillil]

Thank you so much. I don't know which was more difficult to write, the Sirius-Lucius or the sequel to Converting. I really tried to pick up the threads of the plot that were wafting around in my brain last summer, but I couldn't really find them anymore.

Hope you have a lovely few days away!
Thank you, I will. I'm going to be in Lyon. :)

[mauvaise_etoile]

Ooh, the first was amazing. You should cross-post it to black_family. The second was so sweet. (And I will be reading the fic you linked to *g*) Eee, I loved the third. Another wonderful batch :)

[aillil]

Thank you. :) And you think I should post the first one there? Well, why not. I'm a member already. :)

The fic will leave you horribly disappointed, though maybe mildly amused about the first part -- at best. :/

[mauvaise_etoile]

Yes, you should!

I highly doubt that it will leave me disappointed.

[aillil]

Just posted it. :) Thank you for suggesting this.

[aillil]

Thank you! That Lucius-Sirius thing really gave me hell, I have to admit, because I'd never written anything like it before, but once I'd got into it, it kind of came to me.
And that line is my favourite, too. I could so picture Lucius say that. *g*

[_emeraldgreen]

Oooh, I feel quite naughty, but I did rather adore the Lucius/Sirius. And both the R/S drabbles were lovely, especially this:

"Tea?" he managed to say calmly, as if this was something to ponder. He tugged at his lower lip with his teeth and turned towards Remus. "Why yes, that sounds lovely."

♥

[aillil]

Thank you, dear, I'm glad you liked them. The Sirius-Lucius was far from the easiest I've ever written, that's a cert. Still, it exists. :)

And Sirius can out-tease Remus any day of the week -- but we all knew that anyway, I suppose. *lol*