[fic] Just Don't Look Back, Chapter 23 - Yugioh, YamixYugi, angst/romance, R, AU

[aijou_aibou]

Title: Just Don't Look Back
Chapter: 23
Author: Chey (duelist_gurl163)
Rating: R
Genre: Angst/romance
Pairing: YamixYugi
Archive: Here
Overall warnings: AU, implied sex, insanity, violence
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Before he met Yugi, Yami spent his days panhandling alone. Yugi put his heart into

Comments

[bunnynumber13]

Oh no, Yami... I hope he'll be okay! :( That PTSD took over his life and now he may have lost it because of it. And poor Yugi, moving on isn't easy. He'll either hear about what happened to Yami or he won't. Either way it's going to hurt. :(

[aijou_aibou]

Yep...when I label a story angst, I really like to go all out. ^^;;

[hello203]

Nuuuh, Yami. T_T I loved the way you described the earthquake! Especially the ''sixteen point four seconds'' part. It's scary how life-changing situations happen so fast and end just as quickly. :/
Good luck with your computer. I'm sure there's a computer-nerd somewhere that can fix it.*hugs*

[aijou_aibou]

I've always noticed that about my most life-changing situations. Looking back it's like, how could a few seconds make such a difference? But they really can.

Thanks. ;~; The computer guys have always been able to revive poor old Compy before, hopefully they can again. (Gods, that computer place makes so much money off us. >.<)

Your icon is appropriate. xD

[hello203]

I love this icon. X3
It comes from this horrible doujinshi which is basically about Yami Marik raping everyone, but there were a few adorable puzzleshipping moments and I just had to icon it. ^_^'

[animefanemiko]

Aww, poor Yami. ): I just loved the way you described the earthquake. ^^ Good luck with your computer! <3

[momduels]

The writing in this chapter is great. You are getting better with every story. It makes me want to reach out and save Yami. I know you couldn't possibly kill off Yami so I'm hoping he will end up in the hospital and Yugi will find out and go there.