Fic: Fall in love whenever you can - interlude I

[aidrocsid_eris]

The day Yunho left had been beautiful.

The sun had finally begun to shine after weeks of grey clouds and gloomy weather, faint patches of green appeared on trees as leaves formed, and Jaejoong had never felt more like killing someone.

His boyfriend of four years, six months, and who knows how many days had disappeared, leaving behind

Comments

[jaemint]

You know what, I feel sad when I read this interlude chapter. I feel sorry for Yunho. I feel sorry for Jaejoong and most of all, I feel sorry from Changmin. It hurts alot for the three of them, and I can almost feel exactly how they feel. A part of me wanted Jaejoong to stay with Yunho because Yunho is really dying, and also the fact that he loves Jaejoong, and Jaejoong is also in love with him. Another part of me wanted Jaejoong to go back to Changmin because Changmin is the one that I truly believe can make him happy. Changmin is the one that truly loves him without asking for anything in return. And you know what the saddest this is? It's how Jaejoong has already accustomed himself being around Changmin and has fallen in love with him but he can't be together with him because he thinks that he should be in love with Yunho.

Sorry for the long comment but guh, reading this kinda made me cry a little. I can so relate. :)

Another great chapter... please update soon! <333

[aidrocsid_eris]

Aw, thank you for the comment :)
I'm sort of glad that you feel that way, just because I really wanted to convey how difficult the situation was for Jaejoong and make it convincing u__u; It is a rather twisted and it's definitely not easy for him. Or any of them, really.

I will try to update soon! ♥

[kakkobean]

*sobs*

this part just reminds me of what's going to happen in the next chapter (the line "The day Yunho left had been beautiful" sounded like Yunho had died ;__;)

[aidrocsid_eris]

D: I'm sorry about that x__x I tried to warn of jae!sidestory, but I should've specified it was in the past.

[kurogoma]

Jaejoong thought it was easy to leave Changmin because his feelings for Min couldn't possibly be deeper than his feelings for Yunho. They were together for four years and he pined for the fella for five.

So he left Changmin and then couldn't understand why he kept having this ache in his heart and the feeling that something was wrong.

And you are right. It must be shattering to realize too late, that the choice he had made, right or wrong, had caused him to abandon someone he is actually in love with.

This chapter makes me feel so sad for Jaejoong and Changmin.
Yunho too, for he probably realized that things are no longer the same, Jaejoong now loves someone else and that his return has affected more people than he initially thought.

You are good. You have managed to twist our hearts, and made us understand Jaejoong more now, why he did what he did, and how burdened his feelings are.

[aidrocsid_eris]

Yess. I am very glad you see it that way. Above all, I really wanted to get Jae's pov across, to make it clear that it wasn't so easy for him either.

Thank you ♥

[mrsedjack]

Ouch. This hurt. T_____T I don't know how you do it, but you've managed to describe all of these feelings and making us all feel bad for all three of them. O__O It's amazing. Normally you just feel bad for one or two of them and hate the third.
...But I can't hate Yunho. ;___; He's dying.

Your update totally made my day. ♥ It's so BEAUTIFUL!

[aidrocsid_eris]

Aw, thank you ♥ All three of them really do deserve some sympathy.
I'm glad you liked it :)

[realitywaiting]

That was...I'not sure what to say but now i feel really sorry for all of them...it really shows how much life can just kick you in the face...and the little things that help you forget, and move on. I like how simply written this is, it's quite fluid and sad and wonderful at the same time!

[aidrocsid_eris]

Haha, thank you very much :)