Smut Fic: Gentle

[aibhinn]

Title: Gentle
Author: aibhinn
Pairing: Nine/Rose
Rating: M
Word count: 1100
Summary: Not a child, Rose Tyler, the Doctor thought, and she saw herself suddenly through his eyes: brilliant, beautiful, and oh so brave. Written for 50_smutlets. Prompt: Gentle
Spoilers: Father's DayAuthor's notes: This one decided to write itself. I'm not entirely sure where it came

Comments

[larielromeniel]

and left them with nothing but need and love and trust and a vulnerability that terrified.

I love this line!

Great, great story!

[aibhinn]

Thank you! :) This is the one I was telling you about on IM last night. So glad you liked it!

Re: Oh...Hot Nine/Rose

[aibhinn]

Aww, thanks! ♥ I have to credit you for the way he carried her to the bed, and the connection to a father carrying a child that way. When you used it in Disheveled, it struck a chord with me, and so when I was writing this, it just had to be used. Also for the attempt at 3rd person omniscient POV; it's been years since I've tried it, and for once, it seemed to work. :)

Now... just finish the next chapter of Disheveled so I can do my part of our Mutual Admiration Society! *grin*

[faythbrady]

"To start with"-- one of the best end lines I've seen. Love it!

[aibhinn]

Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback. Glad you liked it!

[angela_o]

Oh, that was lovely. There's something utterly compelling about Nine allowing himself to be vulnerable to Rose. *happy sigh* I also loved the way that you wrote Rose's hesitation to speak for fear the moment would be shattered. That rang very true to life.

What a wonderful way to start the morning. Thanks for sharing. :)

[aibhinn]

You're so welcome. Thanks for the lovely review! :)

[canadian_kazz]

Nice, very nice. Well done. :)

[aibhinn]

Thank you so much! :)