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ruins_of_sodom May 13 2007, 23:08:38 UTC
-raises pompoms high- *\o/*
YAY YORU!!!<3
>> Shinkarru brings a twinge of aww to my heart. That was nicely and simply written. You don't give the expressions of their faces right away but you let the reader decide it. Very nice.

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ahou_yorugami May 14 2007, 04:18:06 UTC
XD I find the image more appealing than really writing down the feeling right away. Give them the atmosphere so the reader can make thier own. XD

EEK THANKIES! You make me happy *glomp tackle*

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