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[SC1 #3] Prince Arthur's Pitch, PG (Grapevine)

Mar 13, 2011 13:18

ENTRY #3, 1st SHORT CHALLENGE

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character: gwen, character: arthur, .challenge: short (submissions), writer: rainbow_connec, /theme: grapevine, character: gwaine, rating: k (9+), character: merlin, genre: comedy, character: percival

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rainbow_connec March 20 2011, 01:34:16 UTC

Thank you. I like them being sassy too. Glad you like the banter. I just love Arthur/Gwaine/Gwen moments.

nurse_stiney March 18 2011, 01:31:56 UTC

LOL PERFECT that you ended it with Merlin and Gwaine!!
This was short and sweet and lovely!!

rainbow_connec March 20 2011, 01:30:56 UTC

Glad you liked it. I'll be expanded it because I had fun writing it. Thanks for lovely feedback.

I have had a steampunk prompt and been incapable of writing it so well done :) mustbethursday3 March 18 2011, 08:06:28 UTC

I have a love of random!Gwaine, cheeky!Gwaine, Gwaine's hair mentions...or well any Gwaine really :P so there's some WIN there.

And I loved what you did with Percival - coz seriously WHO IS THAT GUY? - you captured what we know of his personality (ie mysteriousness) perfectly.

Awkward!Arthur's always a fav of mine, I like Gwen being in control...I like the idea of them fighting every time they meet...and man, a Dollophead mention *cries* I hate that word *wipes away tears .....of laughter* but FINE, I'd forgotten it so way to be Canon-y there.

The only sad part was that I was getting into it...and then it ended. *sighs* ...but maybe you'll expand on it later?

Re: I have had a steampunk prompt and been incapable of writing it so well done :) rainbow_connec March 20 2011, 01:28:44 UTC

I wrote it all last minute and such...I had to get it in. This is one that I will definitely expand because it will help me with my Merlin BB and it makes me laugh.

Oh God, Percival was my favorite part!!!! And yeah, a Merlin jab or eye roll at Arthur being Classic!Arthur is just a flat out addiction for me now. Dollophead was LOL and necessary. Clotpole didn't work and I did want to keep it canon. Gwaine is so cocky and Irish...I love him to pieces...notice no Lancelot...no need. :D

ella_rose88 March 20 2011, 22:16:39 UTC

hehehe I loved this fic sooo much!!! I loved everything about it and was sad when I read the last sentence because I wanted MORE!!!!