Fic: Heart on the Line (Raydor/Hobbs)

[afrakaday]

Title: Heart on the Line
Rating: T
Word count: 2500
Pairing: Raydor♥Hobbs
Summary: When Sharon gets hurt in the line of duty, Andrea faces her past...and her future.
A/N: Written for defyingnormalcy’s birthday. Thanks for all the great prompts, hon. :) I hope you have a wonderful day. Thanks to newnumbertwo for her beta.

Comments

[newnumbertwo]

Aww, I love Andrea's transformation here. She wants so much to be the partner Sharon needs, but her fears are so understandable.

I love the guys here; they're so perfect--balloons and all.

Rusty: I love that he leaves to give Andrea time with her, that he's the first person Sharon asks about, and how devoted he is to her. And it's perfect that Andrea's going to step up while Sharon recovers.

With Andrea moving in for a few days, there's some lovely opportunities for a sequel--just saying.

I love this family.

♥ ♥ ♥

[afrakaday]

I'm so glad you thought this fic got the family dynamic all right. Thanks for reading. :)

[defyingnormalcy]

Oh man, this just hit me right in the feels. (and I loved it)

I really adore the backstory that you created for Andrea here, and I love how you wrote that backstory as influencing how she's grown, and how she reacts now in this situation. The support that they have from Rusty, Provenza, and the rest of the MC gang is really wonderful. It warms my heart that regardless of the MC gang's dislike of lawyers, they still accept Hobbs of one of them and are there for her when her lover has been hurt.

You write Andrea' POV beautifully, I could really feel all of the anxiety and fear and love that she felt for Sharon as I was reading.

Buck up, Hobbs. Was she or wasn’t she in this relationship for the long haul?LOVED this. And it's so something I could see her telling herself as well. She's in it for the long haul, and that means that she will help Sharon as she recovers and she will help Sharon and Rusty deal with the emotional ramifications of Sharon being shot. She'll drive Rusty to school and kiss Sharon and tell her that she loves

[afrakaday]

Happy happy birthday to you! I'm so glad to have been a part of the Sharon/Andrea fic and graphic bonanza! I had a ball writing this for you. So glad you liked it. :D

[lanalucy]

I love those last few lines! Just adorable.

[afrakaday]

Hee, thanks for reading! I was pretty pleased when that ending happened for me!

[fragrantwoods]

Loved this--Andrea's back-story, her concern and fear...and the gang being so supportive :-) Yay for Andrea picking up the step-mama role like that :-) So sad to see the magic hair gone :-(
Lovely picture of a healthy, newish relationship as it turns into something even more serious.

[afrakaday]

Like so many characters on TC/MC, the backstory is a wide-open expanse of fic waiting to happen-- so fun as a writer.

It was really cruel of me to dispose of the magic hair like that, huh? Only goes to show the depths of Andrea's love!

[nevada10]

I don't ship them but I love a good, well-written story. Enjoyed this very much! Great use of the "balloon."

[afrakaday]

Thank you so much! I freaking loved that balloon in 6.11 Old Money. A classic Provenza moment, plus it's the episode where the MC gang starts thinking that maybe Sharon's not so bad after all. I had to bring it back!