Fic: A Taste of Home (Raydor/Fritz)

Aug 26, 2012 21:00

Title: A Taste of Home
Author: afrakaday
Rating: M
Word count: 7500
A/N: Thanks to rococoms for research assistance and nixmom for the read-through. Spoilers through The Closer 7x20, “Armed Response,” and Major Crimes 1.02, “Before and After” (kinda)
Summary: An unusual convergence of circumstances allows Sharon and Fritz to experience a brief, if unsettling, ( Read more... )

raydor/fritz, the closer, fanfiction

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newnumbertwo August 27 2012, 01:54:58 UTC
I love it! The kids and Gavin are so great together. I love all the details. Then, of course, the scenes with Fritz.

There's so many emotions coming into play.

Awesome! ♥

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afrakaday August 28 2012, 03:39:17 UTC
Spontaneous overflow of emotion! :D
Thanks for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked their dysfunctional family time.

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marzipanilla August 27 2012, 02:32:48 UTC
Him being over for dinner kinda weirded me out. Just.. yea. Weird. Gavin's reaction to him coming over was great though, and the reason he didn't spill on what was going on between them- hilarious.

Gosh, is there going to be more?

Oh Sharon, shit is so complicated for you.

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afrakaday August 28 2012, 03:42:54 UTC
It was weird, right? Just off, somehow.
I can tell you that there will absolutely be more. The ship of wrongness owns my soul. So many possibilities of where to go with this...

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mellow_mel August 27 2012, 02:53:30 UTC
Getting COMpliCATed!!!!!
Looking forward to seeng how things change after rusty shows up!!!

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afrakaday August 28 2012, 03:43:38 UTC
Thanks for reading! I am curious to see what happens once Rusty shows up, too! :D

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ts6 August 27 2012, 03:27:44 UTC
Yay! I've been waiting for your newest piece of the Sharon/Fritz story. And it was well worth it!! They are moving into majorly complicated territory. I hope you continue writing this pairing. I cannot wait to see what is next.

When he came to get Brenda's candy out of the drawer and it was a little awkward, I thought your writing would have been the best reasoning behind the awkwardness! Glad that you continue to share with us. It is a great AU and your writing is so spot on. It really could happen on the show!!

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afrakaday August 28 2012, 03:50:05 UTC
Thanks for your lovely enthusiasm for this pairing. :) I loved that candy drawer scene so much! Total head canon that it was awkward because they are a sekrit couple!
There is more of this to come, but it is definitely challenging to figure out just how AU to take it, especially with new episodes happening every week. Like, today's episode finally showed us her dining room-- just a tiny bit too late to help me out in writing this fic!

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dlcookie August 27 2012, 03:47:18 UTC
Ah, another Sharon/Fritz story….. YAY!!!!!

I'm starting to really feel for these two, so wrong and yet so perfect together.

Dinner with the family was really sweet. We need more Gavin in everything!

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afrakaday August 28 2012, 03:54:21 UTC
We need more Gavin in everything!
Yes! I am keeping his character alive in fic until they bring him back for Season 2! (Maybe I will write TNT an email right now suggesting that, actually.)

Sharon and Fritz: So wrong they are right, I hope. I never expected to keep writing these two past the plotless smut stage, so it's definitely getting complicated...

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dlcookie August 28 2012, 04:00:12 UTC
One of the cool things about writing fiction is that sometimes the characters need you to tell their story, and they stay with you until it's all out there. I'm always amazed when I realize the story I thought I had to tell is not the story the characters want me to tell.

(It's one of those split-personality writer things, that we understand but anyone who doesn't write thinks we're insane.)

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afrakaday August 28 2012, 04:20:15 UTC
They're so demanding! *sigh*
:)

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