A Couple of White Collar Drabbles

[afiawri]

Title: Mrs. Burke
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Comments

[monkeyonthelam]

That second fic really made me chuckle. The internal monologue you wrote was great. Especially the "you have a penis!" part. Great work.

[afiawri]

Thank you! I'm glad you had fun with it. I did wonder if it was a little over the top as I was writing it, so I'm particularly glad that phrase resonated with you.

[monkeyonthelam]

I probably just had them on my mind after readin rabidchild67's talking dicks fics. The cracky things you lovely people come up with!

[afiawri]

The sentient dick fics are pretty awesome, no? Peter's preoccupation with dicks would be something else in that 'verse, I'm guessing.

[elrhiarhodan]

Love both of them, but especially the humor in the second piece - which is very unusual for you.

Peter's obsessed with everyone's penis - even Hughes!

[afiawri]

Thank you! And yes, very true - I cannot write humor except on accident. And that up there is about the extent of humor that I can write. :) Glad to hear it'll suffice, thank you!

[ladygray99]

These are both great. The fist one is so dark and the second so funny. Don't forget to post them to the com. We'd love to see them.

[afiawri]

Done and done. Thank you, I don't know if I could've kicked myself into gear enough to post without your prodding.

[rabidchild]

That second one is hysterical, adorable, wonderful. Best line evar:

it’s nothing like Neal is right now, standing there, smiling, unaware of his very sexual penis.

Ha!

[afiawri]

Thank you!

I bow to your penis-related humor and I think I really ought to name you as an inspiration on this piece. (Sentient dicks = yummy. Oh, ooooo, will there be any oral on sentient dicks? I wonder if that's at all awkward in your 'verse-which-I'm-most-fascinated-by.)

[rabidchild]

Gosh, thanks! I cannot claim to corner the market on penis humor, but if I've inspired this, then it makes me so happy, because this ficlet was terrific.

I haven't thought about oral-on-sentient-penis at all. This is interesting and disturbing all at once. Because while the penises and pussies talk in my 'verse, there's yet to be anything really graphic. I don't know why that is - I can't explain it. Hmmm...perhaps at some point, but not necessarily in the current series.

[afiawri]

I find myself intrigued to the point of torment by the idea. On the one hand, full-body encasement. On the other, they're kind of made for it. And they don't have eyes to worry about in fully body encasement.

I should be embarrassed about the sheer number of minutes I've devoted to pondering this, but I find I'm not.

[zalman23]

Hmm, let's make Neal squirm and moan and blush！Yum
How Peter's obsession fades is really sweet.XD

[afiawri]

Thank you! Mmm. Neal does need more squirming and moaning and blushing, doesn't he? <3