Leon/The Professional AU (Part 2/4)

[sneaqui]

Title: No One Has a Photo of This Man (changed from The Fallen Man because I kinda hated that title)
Author: sneaqui 
Artist: heavenly_rain 
Team: ANGST
Prompt: innocence, home, overwhelmed
Word Count: 3200
Rated: R
Warnings: graphic-ish depictions of murder, death of a child, mentions of drug use

Summary: Arthur is a hitman. Eames is the teenage boy that lives down the hall

Comments

[ladderax]

So, as you know, I think this is incredible. Your prose style is just--amazing. There's nothing wasted; everything is vivid and revealing of character. You are totally a master of "show don't tell", and you're honestly like one of my prose role models. Like Eames' stepfather--you make him totally loathsome with just a few lines of dialogue

[solitudeinherk]

C-can I just copypaste this comment? Can't say it any better.

[sneaqui]

Copypaste-ing is totally allowed 'round these parts :)

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[sneaqui]

ANJFK;DNJVFDK;V!!! YOUR COMMENTS HAVE REDUCED ME TO A QUIVERING PILE OF GOO!! All these words mean so much to me, bb... I can't even...

Your comments are always so thoughtful, and they help me figure out what I'm doing right and what I still need to work on.

THANK YOU, BABY!! *squeezes you*

[lezzerlee]

alkjsdfljadsf You have no idea how pleased I am that you are actually writing this and that it is happening because it's so good! You've captured the feel of the movie, the key scenes, without copying it completely! It's different and yet the same which in my opinion is quite an accomplishment!

I'm thoroughly enjoying this!

& JFC the expressions in the artwork are awesome! I love Eames' smirk and Arthur's stoic slight grimace. Perfect!