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Leave Home

Jul 10, 2011 00:03

Title: Leave Home
Author: sneaqui
Team: ANGST!
Prompt: Horizon
Word Count: 930
Rating: PG
Warnings: None. Except that this has a suuuuper ambiguous ending.

A/N: An angsty little high school au. I wrote this in two hours and honestly have no idea where it came from. I just got stuck on the prompt "horizon" and listened to Bon Iver's "Holocene" over and over... ( Read more... )

prompt: horizon, team angst, fanfic

Comments 17

we_reflamingos July 10 2011, 05:18:12 UTC

:( I love short-form that can pack so much into so little. Great job. :)

lezzerlee July 10 2011, 05:35:16 UTC

OMG ALL THE CRIES! LISTENING TO THE MUSIC AT THE SAME TIME IS JUST HEARTBREAKING! *sobs*

It's beautiful.

ladderax July 10 2011, 05:48:38 UTC

This is a gorgeous, sad little fic. You have such talent for creating visual images. TEACH ME EVERYTHING YOU KNOW.

And that ending!

daraq July 10 2011, 18:09:04 UTC

This is lovely! Thank you for sharing it.

sneaqui July 12 2011, 03:22:28 UTC

And THANK YOU so so much for reading and commenting :)

shaded_sun July 10 2011, 18:53:47 UTC

Arthur’s lips twitch in thought. “Texts get erased. I lose stuff all the time when I empty my inbox. And phones die. Letters last a lot longer.”

I've got a lump in my throat. ;_; I love everything about this. The fierce devotion, the heartache, that they both know this is for the best, at least for the moment. In my mind they find each other again. They care for each other too much not to. ♥

sneaqui July 12 2011, 03:24:12 UTC

I always lose stuff when I empty my inbox on my phone!!

I'm so happy that you found this affecting! And that their feelings for each other came across. I am sure they will figure out some way to be together :)

Thank you for reading and commenting!!