Read the PREVIOUS entry first!!
Ian and jumpintime, who have already read this about a week before, please do take the time to read it again. It has been severely edited, and I apologize for being so stupid as to let you guys read the disgusting first draft. This is the continuation of Chapter Four: The Land of the Free, and has been unimaginatively renamed Part II. Part III will ( Read more... )
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The hate relationships come out the best in the end, don't you think? (sasukenarutosasukenaruto hinthinthint) Another reason why I detest Sai, but that isn't the point.
SHARP POINTY OBJECTS FU- RUUUUUUUUULEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Zrina is insanely hilarious. Oh and Kilan was just a longer version of Kil. I think I'll explain more on her next time. ~LOVE
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i love kiba. he is brimming with intelligence. i hope he got dissed real bad by the ice princess. really really really hope. that'd be a scene to die in laughter for.
haha! dan even managed to sound protective of his team, responsible, even, for a guy like him. you rock at this, man. making characters feel realistic.
IAN.
ps. did i mention yet? kiba rocks. love him! <3
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PINK RULES! (Sometimes) I wouldn't mind having a room like that on nice days.
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so you decided to make Kil an Icy Angel. =D
so sad, it isn't so surprising anymore, but the part where Kil stared into Ash's soul was much better. Thinking back, that part was kinda lame and typical. Its makes you go more into it now.
Is waiting anxiously and excitedly for more about Kiba and Kil and Part III.
I thought Ash was your favourite character! So you like Kil and Dan better than Ash and Kiba? I LIKE KIBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA =D
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p.s kick your piano away and type the next part!
p.p.s Tomoe! I SAW IT SOMEWHERE. WHERE WAS THAT?
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Why, oh why does every one like kiba? not that im not pleased of course... but i would really like to know why.
And I cant kick the piano away, i think i have to go and practice now *GROAN* ... and as for the Tomoe name, I will give you a book title
TOTTO-CHAN.
Ring a bell now? XD
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You just went and practise now so noisy. Hmmph.
NONONONONO not toto-chan! I saw Tomoe somewhere. The whole word. Maybe it was at comics collection. So she is Japish lar..?
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I fell over laughing, reading that.
And it still doesn't ring a bell? Tsk. You forget that Tomoe was the name of the school Totto-chan went to.
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(i really think maybe chapter 1 should be prologue now.!)
HAHA first of all, Kiba. MANNNN THAT JOKER, haha he really likes a little drama doesnt he! exciting entrance, i hope he becomes more dynamic next, seriously this will turn super good!
AND OMG YOU TURNED KIL INTO A PINK FREAKKKKKKKKKKK! no complaints though, you kind of made that sound cute, HAHA:D but reading this i really really CANNOT imagine how ash will fantasise about her ice princess (refer: chapter 1, the way things are!) whee i cant wait for more development.!
Kil is what, Japanese? Is Kilan her surname?
(okay anyway that room was the bomb really. it was totally unexpected la!! oh man, pink and blue--> ultimate mainstream colours. but it's kil, goddess of pinkcutefluffy things, so it's <3 ( ... )
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(About Chapter 1: You know what, I really think so too.)
I kind of wanted people to know from Kil being a pink cuteness lurrver... that not all pink cuteness lurrvers are stupid bimbos. Does that make sense? Yes it does. SO DON'T STEROTYPE, PEOPLE!
Kilan is Kil's real name. Kil is a nickname. Tomoe is her surname.
Myavi meets hello kitty? OMFG THAT WAS WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I can't even begin to describe how very wrong that image was. XoX
And wow, you totally read my mind. I have been thinking of doing an arc on Dan for a very long time now, only I don't know whether to release it as a separate fic or not. Because I actually harbor a secret love for Dan's story! (All planned in my head, of course)LOL.
last of all. yo man, it's BIB. though that's just weird.
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hahaha
long comments?? I just talk a lot .__. here's more ramble.!
(chapter1: YES YES. I keep going back to refresh my memory and now i keep having that notion in my head. you realise, it is somewhat a SPOILER?!!)
No it doesnt cause pink lovers are an exception! serious. really i think that is because you totally havent met this pink girl in nanyang. *tell you about it tmr!! i tell you colour-obsessions do freak me out especially if i dont know that person well!! BUT I WANT TO CLARIFY THAT KIL IS ALRIGHT CAUSE SHE HAS ASH TO BALANCE IT OUT ^^
(!! in the deeper realms of my imagination fruit obsessions seem to be cuteR la. think if you walk into said obsessed girl's room and she has banana wallpapers and banana plushies, complete with a sunny yellow dressing of her walls. then her shampoo and stuff are all banana flavoured!, HAHAHAHAHA banana freak belongs in my imagination, i'm sorry about that.)
right, so i have actually tried to check out the name kilan tomoe!
>< anyway i ( ... )
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