Read the PREVIOUS entry first!!

[adriatic_air]

Ian and jumpintime, who have already read this about a week before, please do take the time to read it again. It has been severely edited, and I apologize for being so stupid as to let you guys read the disgusting first draft. This is the continuation of Chapter Four: The Land of the Free, and has been unimaginatively renamed Part II. Part III will

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[anonymous]

yo.

so you decided to make Kil an Icy Angel. =D

so sad, it isn't so surprising anymore, but the part where Kil stared into Ash's soul was much better. Thinking back, that part was kinda lame and typical. Its makes you go more into it now.

Is waiting anxiously and excitedly for more about Kiba and Kil and Part III.

I thought Ash was your favourite character! So you like Kil and Dan better than Ash and Kiba? I LIKE KIBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA =D

jumpintime-

p.s kick your piano away and type the next part!

p.p.s Tomoe! I SAW IT SOMEWHERE. WHERE WAS THAT?

[adriatic_air]

hmm, I like Kil best. Ash is my main character, so i have to like her constantly, or this fic will die. The rest of them are just the same to me... lol.

Why, oh why does every one like kiba? not that im not pleased of course... but i would really like to know why.

And I cant kick the piano away, i think i have to go and practice now *GROAN* ... and as for the Tomoe name, I will give you a book title

TOTTO-CHAN.

Ring a bell now? XD

[anonymous]

cuz Kiba is erm..more fun than Dan? I mean Dan is like da ren already. And Kiba is more funny and entertaining, like making Dan put Ash in Kil's room. Dan just perverts about. Beep Beep.

You just went and practise now so noisy. Hmmph.

NONONONONO not toto-chan! I saw Tomoe somewhere. The whole word. Maybe it was at comics collection. So she is Japish lar..?

jumpintime-

[adriatic_air]

"Dan just perverts about. Beep. Beep."

I fell over laughing, reading that.

And it still doesn't ring a bell? Tsk. You forget that Tomoe was the name of the school Totto-chan went to.

[anonymous]

=DDDD

OHOHOHOHHHHHHHHHHH YA! But nope, I didn't get it from there. It was something recent. What's Tamaki's name? and the other smart smart guy. Any of their names is Tomoe?

jumpintime-

LETS DIGRESS ABIT. I THINK ICECREAM IS NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

[adriatic_air]

Suoh Tamaki. And Kyouya. No Tomoe.

[anonymous]

how about rurouni kenshin

[adriatic_air]

what about that? O.O

[anonymous]

like tomoe came from there, baaaaka. :D

right... and this is hitplayer.!