Broken- A tale of fairness and maybes

[adrenalineshots]

It was mesmerizing to watch, the way his mouth said one thing and his expressive eyes said the exact opposite words. Words like ‘stay’ and ‘hold me’ and ‘I’m scared’, normal words, expected words that I somehow knew he would never say, not because he was too proud to say them, but because he wasn’t used to them.

Comments

[somer]

This is so beautifully written. Damn, I love your choice of the outsider POV! And then first '“I don’t want him around when it happens,” he whispered.' and then 'His eyes were telling me he was truly terrified of dying alone. No one should die alone.'

Loved it!!

[adrenalineshots]

Thank you! This was one of the first SPN stories that I've written, so it always awesome to see that people still like it :))

[werewolfsfan]

Utterly perfect!

[adrenalineshots]

Thank you!