Comments | adrenalineshots: Broken- A tale of fairness and maybes

adrenalineshots

Broken- A tale of fairness and maybes

Dec 11, 2007 20:40

It was mesmerizing to watch, the way his mouth said one thing and his expressive eyes said the exact opposite words. Words like ‘stay’ and ‘hold me’ and ‘I’m scared’, normal words, expected words that I somehow knew he would never say, not because he was too proud to say them, but because he wasn’t used to them.

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episode-tag, season 1, outsider pov, dean, supernatural

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adrenalineshots April 11 2008, 16:56:02 UTC

Thank you!

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adrenalineshots April 11 2008, 16:54:56 UTC

Thank you! No, these 3 are all I have in the Supernatural fandom. I have more stories (about Prison Break, House, Lord of the Rings and Stargate SG1) in the Fanfiction Net archieve. Here's the link if you're interested: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/431476/Ophium

borgmama1of5 October 2 2009, 19:47:15 UTC

Every one of your stories that I've read so far has made me cry!

You are very gifted at conveying depth without excess words!

adrenalineshots October 2 2009, 20:51:11 UTC

*blush* Thank you!

glorious_spoon April 11 2010, 16:29:58 UTC

Here from SPN story finders...loved this one :)

adrenalineshots April 12 2010, 20:27:16 UTC

Cool! Thanks!

phyllis2779 June 13 2010, 17:34:17 UTC

This was poignant. Great story. Loved the ambiguity at the end for the doctor.

adrenalineshots June 13 2010, 20:41:15 UTC

Thank you! Man.. its been ages since this story... its so good to see that people still read it :)