Ready or Not Chapter 2

Jan 02, 2011 21:53

In which I continue to be a mean cock-blocking author lol.

Title: Ready or Not Chapter 2
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 4007
Genre: Romantic /Fluff/Slice of Life/
Rating: R
Summary:  Jinki has to deal with more jealousy over Taemin than he expected/Taemin just wants to be with Jinki
A/N Because  I didn't want to sound like an even bigger pervette than I ( Read more... )

ontae, my fic, my fic: ready or not, taemin, onew

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addicterated January 3 2011, 02:59:10 UTC
spot for ellie_eunnie

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ellie_eunnie January 5 2011, 10:37:34 UTC
yay I got a spot!

"I love you," he whispers, as if the words are too frail to face the morning at full volume.
so beautiful

Easing up on an elbow, Taemin looks at Jinki. His hair is a mess and there are sheet crinkles on his cheek but he is still the most beautiful man in Taemin's eyes. "I love you too," he says simply and kisses Jinki's cheek. "But you get to tell the others," Taemin adds, sliding out of bed before Jinki can grab him.
haha, the little imp...this was so sweet

Jinki can hear voices down the hall and isn't surprised when Key comes knocking on the door and then opening it a crack. He half turns as if to shield Taemin from Key's curious and concerned glance. "We just got a call, we have to go soon...thought you might like not to be surprised when manager hyung shows up," Key says softly then his glance hardens. "And if you hurt Taemin I will break your face." lol, he would ;D ( ... )

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addicterated January 5 2011, 10:39:43 UTC
Hee :) so glad you liked the two chapters and yeah there is more coming. Did you get to read I Call The Shots? *hugs*

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ellie_eunnie January 5 2011, 10:58:07 UTC
no...
did I leave a spot and forget about it? =)
if I did I'm sorry, remind me next time?

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addicterated January 3 2011, 02:59:27 UTC
spot for silencethecry

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addicterated January 3 2011, 02:59:42 UTC
spot for sujuhigh

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addicterated January 3 2011, 07:16:19 UTC
yeah, Minho was...um..difficult and you're welcome and more is coming and yeah...I love both of these guys in this fic very much...Jinki I think especially..:D :D :D

hey are you safe at school and whatnot?

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addicterated January 3 2011, 03:00:17 UTC
evilvalenstrife January 4 2011, 07:28:35 UTC
*drops slice of red velvet cake*
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*stands up, grabs pack of camels from mini-fridge, a bottle of Vanilla Smirnoff*
Excuse me...
*goes outside for a bit and comes back in*
That was like word sex!!! I couldn't come up with a better term! It was passionate and... It was just effin' awesome!!!! You deserve all the cookies in the freakin' world!

Key's laser stare! It kinda reminds me of the stare my mom gives me when I wake her up at 3AM by laughing my ass off at Youtube....

Possessive Jinki is best Jinki! Although, ObessessedWithChicken Jinki is pretty damn close!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

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lullabyrui January 3 2011, 05:28:21 UTC
OMg I love this so much.
Yes Taemin Jinki's possesivness is very much HOT!
Gah I don't know how you do it, but you make magic with your words :)

I don't even know where to start.
From beginning to end really <3
I just love the story so much. Lol

-"Jinki hyung," Taemin says nervously, his voice soft as his lungs feel deflated and without breath. That is...until Jinki's hand brushes through his hair softly in an undeniably affectionate and possessive gesture.- It makes me so happy. Lol

Wonderful <3

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addicterated January 3 2011, 05:31:58 UTC
aww thank you so much and of course you can :) <3

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