Forgive Me This Moment - Moments Update - Chapter 12

Dec 12, 2010 10:40

Title: Forgive Me This Moment
Pairing: Heechul/Kyuhyun, slight Yesung/Ryeowook cameos by DongHae and Sungmin
Length: 3097
Genre: Angst/Drama/Romance
Rating: R for language mainly
Summary:  HeeChul decides he and KyuHyun need to speak face to face. And so on.
A/N Muses are so annoying. They either won't make up or they want to make up too soon ( Read more... )

cuteness kills me, my fic, friends are good, heechul, kyuhyun, my fic: moments, kyuchul, heekyun

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catherine_leite December 12 2010, 20:30:55 UTC
LOL....everyone shouted FINALLY! So, imma join them... FINALLY!!!!!!
See, all you need just say what you feel heechul...
Aahhh...I'm glad.... YAY!!

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addicterated December 12 2010, 21:12:34 UTC
HeeChul is a guy, he can't help it if he's dumb sometimes. LOL. I'm so glad you liked it :)

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addicterated December 17 2010, 06:17:04 UTC

cablackwood December 12 2010, 21:09:20 UTC
Yay! 'bout damn time these pabos made up! ^_^

and Kyu bb, why you compairing yourself to Hangeng!? NEVER do that again, or I will knock you up side the head for it!

HeeChul ignores them, holding on to a fistful of curtain fabric without realizing it.
That image is still so adorable in my mind xD

"Sleep first? And then, I expect you to keep me very busy, Heenim,"
Oh we're ALL expecting that ;)
.....or at least I am *giggles*

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addicterated December 12 2010, 21:13:19 UTC
Cause Kyu is dumb sometimes. It goes with being a guy lol.

I love him in this chapter, HeeChul I mean.

And yay for busy KyuChul *wink wink nudge nudge*

Hiya :)

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cablackwood December 12 2010, 21:24:21 UTC
*waves* Hi :)

"busy" Kyuchul 8DDDDDDDDDDDD

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addicterated December 12 2010, 21:33:12 UTC
*sporfles* you're so cute <3 and i love that idea too :D

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eundaesi December 13 2010, 02:20:20 UTC
sweet......

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addicterated December 13 2010, 02:32:14 UTC
Uh, glad you like it. I hope?

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addicterated December 17 2010, 06:17:25 UTC

veltana December 14 2010, 18:26:54 UTC
That was so great :D
I love your kind of writing, how you fit everything together so nicely. It doesn't feel chopped, like... aarrgh! It's kind of hard to explain >_<
The text flow is so nice and easy, that there is no strain when I'm reading. I don't have to think about what you meant or what exactly just happened, really. So I can just really concentrate on the whole of the story and nothing else ^^

I'm in love with Kyuchul right now! :DD

Continuation of this?
<3

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addicterated December 14 2010, 18:32:06 UTC
thank you so much, I like to try to have a smooth and flowing style most of the time.

Plus I'm very detail oriented so I tend to pay attention to a lot of small things to make it more "visual" like having a movie playing across yoru eyeballs.

I'm so glad you're in love with the pairing. I love converting people to KyuChul.

And yeah there is an update coming. Moments is my big project (didn't start out that way jus thappened) so yeah ther will be more.

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addicterated December 17 2010, 06:17:34 UTC

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addicterated December 15 2010, 09:35:37 UTC
Hey :) I have goofy tags, lol. But honestly when these two are happy, they are mostly sickeningly fluffy and cute ( ... )

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addicterated December 17 2010, 06:17:43 UTC

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