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[addicterated]

So... I am still trying to kill the writer's block and also as I said to min7girl I think I have a confidence block. I think everything I write lately is crap, she says it isn't so. So, I decided to do a little stream of consciousness thing. This is what came out. I hope you like it. It's kinda angsty and short.

"I'm scared, you know," Jinki says quietly.

Comments

[acornmama]

What are you talking about? What crap? You write just fine. I think you should just put what you think is crap out there and let the rest of us be the judge. We would tell you if/when you are off and we will tell you the truth.
Your writing is just fine.
This was a little angsty, but in the end the love is there. Very important.

[suntea6]

This is amazing! Please don't doubt your skill, you're a fabulous writer! :D

[jinkibumiminho]

Fluffy babies are fluffy. Jinki's insecurity rings true, even though he was the one with all the extracurriculars last year. Taemin's response was lovely.

[linnhe]

I really like this idea of Onew struggling with Taemin growing up, you wrote it soft and beautiful <3

[kpopstolemysoul]

It's really awesome. I wasn't in the mood for insecure Jinki when I first read it, so I had to come back and really read it again. There is such a high quality to what you write, in so many ways; I wish you could read you(r writing) like your faithful readers do. You'd feel great about your writing skills in a nanosecond if you could only view it through our eyes and if you could only feel what you make us feel.

It's a great kernel of a story idea too - so perfect for a drabbleish thing - the new activities Taemin is scheduled for.

The ending was superb. I don't know a critic's words for how the ending is wrapped up and pulled to a close, but you def nailed it.