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McFly (groupslash)
2,600 words, r, third person. So, back in January, I wrote in the night we will find you, about a Tom born with wings. Recently, I decided that I wanted to expand on that, and thus, this story was born. It takes place before, after, and during in the night. Not precisely a sequel, so it's not

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[evolia]

Dude, I could. I honestly could have cried, almost did. I love this so much, Maddy, I honestly do. The beginning, I felt so bad for Tom, and the description. The descriptions of the blood and the hurt and I was just there with him, honestly, like. Bleeding.

It's so beautiful, Maddy? Harry so harsh and real, Danny, ever so protective and Dougie, always so fragile, so young, yet there, always there. They're such a unit and there's so much love, like, sweating from every word, every look, every touch you wrote.

Maddy, this was way, way beyond wonderful. ♥_____♥.

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Thank you so much, Ellie! I'm so glad. I truly think that Tom would ruin his wings for them - for the chance of a band, anyway, and. I just wanted to show that. The unit of them is my favorite part of writing them, hands down. (Also, there's something about writing Harry's sharp tongue that I love a lot. He's so mean without really meaning any of it at all, and that's super interesting.)

I love them so much, Ellie. I really do. ♥!

[addtastic]

That was...AMAZING!
So true to character and just perfect.
I'm pretty much speechless right now.

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Thank you so much! Glad they seemed in character. :D

[angelaizapunx]

BIG smile on my face right now.

Oh lord how I've fallen in love with Floynter (which is mostly due to you and picking that certain prompt that has me making them the cutest couple since..anything) But enough about me let's talk about this.

Let me say that I wanted this to be a lot longer and include more parts with Tom and Dougie but...Ugh, you're Harry. He's just how I would imagine him to be. An unintentional douche bag with underlying friendly qualities and I'm sort of in hate with him right now which is a good thing. And Danny...I love your Danny. Yes, I do.

This was very much amazing.

[addandsubtract]

Seriously, the floynter has taken over my brain. I won't even tell you how much. And I'm so, so looking forward to that fic, honestly!

I love writing Harry - he's got such a sharp tongue, and he doesn't always know when enough is enough. He doesn't mean it, but he can't help it, and I love that. So interesting, seriously.

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you like it. ♥

[stjarna1984]

I tried, but I can't actually come up with more than a *sigh* as my reaction to this. it's just so. them

♥

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Thaaaaaank you! ♥ They are such a unit in my head, seriously.

[foreverlove_xx]

Usually I don't like fics with McFly having wings.
But I really loved this one.
It was beautiful and I think my heart melted a little.
I loved every word.
Amazing.

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Thanks for giving this a try anyway! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :D