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[addandsubtract]

ad libitum; your choice; at will
McFly (groupslash)
2,600 words, r, third person. So, back in January, I wrote in the night we will find you, about a Tom born with wings. Recently, I decided that I wanted to expand on that, and thus, this story was born. It takes place before, after, and during in the night. Not precisely a sequel, so it's not

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[addandsubtract]

Thanks! ♥

[txorakeriak]

Wonderful story. I love how they all make sure Tom knows they care about him. And how there's something amazing about Tom's wings to all of them, even Tom in the end.

[addandsubtract]

Thank you so much. I love writing about how much they care about each other. It just seems so integral to them as a group, I guess. I'm glad that you liked it! ♥

[kawaii_tenshi27]

Maddy, Maddy, I love you. Really I do. I know I told you before how much I like this, but it's so beautifully written. And they're all just so. So. Ugh. I want to hug Tom and Dougie and Danny and I want to hit Harry over the head and then hug him, too. And they're just. Again I say ugh, because I don't know what else to say.

I really did love it before, and now I love it even more with the changes you've made.

<3

[addandsubtract]

Ooh, I'm glad that changes work, seriously. Because I think I'm happier with it now, all things considered. And, really, Harry is such a prat. I love writing him that way. Can't keep his fucking mouth shut. Also, they are all in love.

♥

[kawaii_tenshi27]

It's magnificant.

Yes. Yes they are.

And he is. And can't. Which is why the others must find other uses for it. ::smarms daggers::

[figletofvenice]

You're magnificent.

In loooooove!

You just want more porn. Which I owe you, really.

[goodgod_damn]

massive, massive amounts of love.

i don't even know what to say, except that this's beautiful and amazing, and i'm completely in love with every word of it.

tom fletcher ♥. harry's mean fucking mouth. “you’ve stopped fucking eating, you utter bastard.” danny's protectiveness, and tom wanting to slip him fingers between his. and dougie needing tom. just.
incredible.

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[addandsubtract]

Thank you so much! Tom is (not-so)secretly my favorite to write, and I'm glad their personalities came through in this. I loved writing it.

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[bffimagine]

*Snifflesob*

The belting hurt--it really hurt, just reading about Tom's pain and the others' reactions. They'll save him, won't they?

♥

[addandsubtract]

He gets through it okay, don't worry. :D Thank you for reading! I'm glad that you like it.