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bend all your notes for me
McFly (Danny/Harry)
3,793 words, nc-17, third person. I, rather drunkenly at the time, promised evolia that I'd write her porn. So now, several days later, and much more sober, I have managed to do so. This fic is pretty much entirely without plot - just sex under the cut, guys. I hope you enjoy it anyway! Thanks to kawaii_tenshi27 for

Comments

[evolia]

ILU. Like, pure and simple, I do, because that? That is so awesome. It's only porn, as you said, but yet again there's the fact that they can't leave without telling the others (because LOOOOOVE) and there's the fact that Danny didn't do anything sexual with a guy since Harry, because it's Harry, you know, just him, just that. And then there's the dirty talking! OMG THE DIRTY TALKING HOW MUCH DO I LOVE IT MADDY? You are so awesome, you. So, so so much.

The descriptions of the beat and stuff were so vivid, dude, I was feeling them. And then. Then there's them and their urgency and raw need for each other. One year! I love that you had them not doing this for the first time, too? Because they are so like that, having casual/slightly angsty sex that caused trouble (the Dougie thing made me think it caused trouble in the past) and then stopping for a while and getting desperate for each other because it's so much more than that, yet they can't say it. Harry marking/claiming Danny is proof of that to me? Like 'rawr, mine', you know

[evolia]

*re-reads*

Also? FRECKLEEEEEEEES.

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FRECKLEEEEEES. I AM GLAD THAT YOU NOTICED. I LOVE THEM A LOT.

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This comment is amazing. In case you didn't already know this. I'm sure I've told you enough times, ahahahahahaha. BUT YOU KNOW HOW I FEEL ABOUT PORN! I LIKE TO KNOW WHEN IT TURNS OUT OKAY. The dirty talking isn't even my fault, because they would SHUT THE FUCK UP, NOT AT ALL. Not that I mind, I mean. 'Cause I don't.

For some reason I see it as this on-again off-again type of relationship - they both like each other more than they should, something that's more than family and more that a crush, but maybe not quite love. It could be love, or it would be love, except that they go off again before anything more serious than sex can happen. Mostly this is because they both know, if things go wrong, they could fuck up the whole band irreparably, and not only would that fuck them over, it would also affect Dougie and Tom and that's not something they want to be responsible for

[earenya_beryl]

*gulp* Wow that was more...erm, OMG!!!!! than I ever thought it would be.
VEry descriptive, I kinda sweat a bit after reading that at 5.56 in the morn, while being kinda half awake.Yeah.

The dirty talk was not at all cheesy , it just adds to the urgency perfectly you know.

Can't really speak right now, but awesome piece and thanks for posting :)

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Thank you! I'm glad you like it! :D I don't write porn all that often, so I'm very happy that it doesn't seem cheesy or overdone.

[bumble_85]

OMGZ

*dead of hot*

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Hee! No death! (I am glad that you like it! :D)

[random_eyeliner]

I was planning to write a comment about how much I love every one of your fics but after reading this I've literally forgotten it completely.

This was more than hot. And it seemed so...real. Like vivid. The best porn is the really descriptive well written porn like this. Oh and I think you basically captured everything about this pairing that I love.

Is there anything you cant write?! Because I seriously don't think I've ever read anything by you that I havent completely loved.

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Wow, thank you so much! I'm very glad that you like this - I really don't write porn that often. It's fun everyone once in awhile though! I'm so happy this seemed vivid and realistic, as that's totally what I was going for. :D

[juddpoynter]

Guh. Thank you for satifying my secret Junes smut desires. :D

Fucking brilliant. I have a HUGE thing for Harry being the dom - HUGE. I'd love to see him in a Pudd *drools*

I loved the marking Harry did, the whole fingers in Danny's thigh was just...ooh. ♥

You're a fantastic writer!

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You are welcome! Hee. :D (There should be more Junes smut, yes?)

Dom!Harry is so much fun to write - I honestly couldn't get the two of them to stop cursing at each other. I'm glad that you like this! ♥