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McFly (Danny/Harry)
3,793 words, nc-17, third person. I, rather drunkenly at the time, promised evolia that I'd write her porn. So now, several days later, and much more sober, I have managed to do so. This fic is pretty much entirely without plot - just sex under the cut, guys. I hope you enjoy it anyway! Thanks to kawaii_tenshi27 for

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[evolia]

ILU. Like, pure and simple, I do, because that? That is so awesome. It's only porn, as you said, but yet again there's the fact that they can't leave without telling the others (because LOOOOOVE) and there's the fact that Danny didn't do anything sexual with a guy since Harry, because it's Harry, you know, just him, just that. And then there's the dirty talking! OMG THE DIRTY TALKING HOW MUCH DO I LOVE IT MADDY? You are so awesome, you. So, so so much.

The descriptions of the beat and stuff were so vivid, dude, I was feeling them. And then. Then there's them and their urgency and raw need for each other. One year! I love that you had them not doing this for the first time, too? Because they are so like that, having casual/slightly angsty sex that caused trouble (the Dougie thing made me think it caused trouble in the past) and then stopping for a while and getting desperate for each other because it's so much more than that, yet they can't say it. Harry marking/claiming Danny is proof of that to me? Like 'rawr, mine', you know?

Oh, and yes. Took me a few minutes before I got to that (and to spazz at you over msn). Beforehand, I was dead by the HOT. SO HOT, MADDY?

YOU ARE AN AMAZING BEING. I LOVE YOU VERY VERY MUCH. THANK YOU SO MUCH!

[evolia]

*re-reads*

Also? FRECKLEEEEEEEES.

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FRECKLEEEEEES. I AM GLAD THAT YOU NOTICED. I LOVE THEM A LOT.

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This comment is amazing. In case you didn't already know this. I'm sure I've told you enough times, ahahahahahaha. BUT YOU KNOW HOW I FEEL ABOUT PORN! I LIKE TO KNOW WHEN IT TURNS OUT OKAY. The dirty talking isn't even my fault, because they would SHUT THE FUCK UP, NOT AT ALL. Not that I mind, I mean. 'Cause I don't.

For some reason I see it as this on-again off-again type of relationship - they both like each other more than they should, something that's more than family and more that a crush, but maybe not quite love. It could be love, or it would be love, except that they go off again before anything more serious than sex can happen. Mostly this is because they both know, if things go wrong, they could fuck up the whole band irreparably, and not only would that fuck them over, it would also affect Dougie and Tom and that's not something they want to be responsible for.

But they could be so good for each other. And they know it. And they just keep coming back.

ANYWAY, THIS IS FOR YOU, AND SO I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT. ILU ELLIE!! ♥