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Super Junior/Panic! At The Disco - Kibum/Spencer Smith (with peripheral/past Siwon/Kibum, Pete Wentz/Patrick Stump (Fall Out Boy), Heechul/Donghae, Eeteuk/Kyuhyun)
4,758 words. PG-13. Second person. Written for the miracle______ crossover contest. Originally posted here, anonymously.
( You want to be so different from what you were, that they’ll never recognize you. )
Super Junior/Panic! At The Disco - Kibum/Spencer Smith (with peripheral/past Siwon/Kibum, Pete Wentz/Patrick Stump (Fall Out Boy), Heechul/Donghae, Eeteuk/Kyuhyun)
4,758 words. PG-13. Second person. Written for the miracle______ crossover contest. Originally posted here, anonymously.
( You want to be so different from what you were, that they’ll never recognize you. )
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*grins* Hi there! I think it was painfully obvious who wrote this, and I mean to make this sound as a compliment. Congrats, I'm so glad I didn't bring bad luck on you with my vote as I usually do whenever I decide to vote for someone on some contest. Gawd, I'm such a jinx. D8
Anyway, now that I'm not too busy/lazy to comment.
California is everything and nothing that you remember, dry heat and bright sun, layer of smog that brushes over everything like a fine, fine oil sheen. Surface, surface, surface, everywhere
This description makes me want to pack and run off to the states, for some reason. It sounds so dreamy and huge and makes Korea seem like such a cozy little place in comparison, such a huge change for Kibum.
You flip through your wallet, realizing that you still have 10,000 won stuffed down in the back, and you don’t have the heart to exchange it.
As a person unable to throw out/change even the smallest things, I can't help but *sadface* at that. D8 And then
Maybe one day, maybe, you will go back.; oh, ( ... )
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I think it was painfully obvious who wrote this, and I mean to make this sound as a compliment.
Ahahahahaha! Yeah, I kind of thought that people would know this was me, if they'd read anything I've written before. I do take that as a compliment, though!
It sounds so dreamy and huge and makes Korea seem like such a cozy little place in comparison, such a huge change for Kibum.
I've never been to Korea, but, to me, the US is just such an overwhelmingly huge country, I just can't imagine it not being different, y'know? :D
Brendon's so precious.
He is, he is! I mean, he really does talk a lot. And just. He seems like kind of a tool in real life, to me, but a loveable one.
I absolutely ♥ all the touching going on from this point on, like they are trying to pull Kibum's story out of him physically and yet oh so carefully.Yes, yes, yes! Exactly! They are all really that touchy, anyway, but I just wanted to get across that sense of connection, and, well. I can't help but write them all as ( ... )
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I think my country's smaller than SK (though I'm lazy to check now), and I've only ever seen the US in teh movies~ But to me, used to live in a place where long distance is an unknown term, all those roads and empty spaces sound very tempting.
He seems like kind of a tool in real life, to me, but a loveable one.
Like a puppy with tricks~ 8D
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Ahahaha! Even living in the US, they sound tempting. To me, at least. Maybe that comes from city living. :D
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pouring over the controls --> eh, it ought to be poring?
You want to amazing. --> I think it's missing a "be"?
He uses even worse grammar and punctuation than Heechul does, and you feel the pang of homesickness, but you are still glad that you left.
AHAHAHAHAHAH. I am being constantly amused by this. I think I ought to be touched, but maybe that part comes later. *reads on!*
“Hi there,” Jon says, “you must be Kibum the Hot Sound Tech. I’ve heard a bunch about you.”
You hear Brendon’s strangled giggle from behind you, and Spencer is standing in the doorway with a blush on his face.
“Um,” you say, and Jon starts laughing.
Jon Walker is made of amazing, even in fics.
Okay and then I was eaten up by the rest of the fic and now look at you with big, woobly eyes and heart madly. Like so: ♥♥♥♥♥
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Ugh, I always miss a few typos. I just kind of fail like that! So, thank you for pointed them out.
I think I ought to be touched, but maybe that part comes later.
Psht, amusement is just as good as, er, being touched. Besides, Pete does actually fail at typing, which I find is a constant source of hilarity.
Jon Walker is made of amazing, even in fics.
Because he's Jon Walker. Oh, Jon, never change.
Ahahahaha, I'm glad that you like it! It was so so so much fun to write. ♥♥♥
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But his replies to the fan-questions are so! Funny! And recently Shizzical has been posting DBSK's replies to fan-questions too and I swear Changmin is like the younger, girlier, but equally sarcastic version of Pete Wentz.
A leopard never changes its spots? ...Is that applicable.
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They really, really are. I love it! And, wait, what? What is this? For serious? Somehow that doesn't actually surprise me all thay much. Oh Changmin ♥
I think it's applicable. And if it isn't, well. It is now?
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because this is awesome, it cannot be denied. the saving of the text messages and the money was so- poignant? something like that. also, Pete's txt with its (non)punctuation and rad= MADE OF WIN. which means it's made of JWalk because he is just yay. favorite line was “You remind me of someone I know, but you’re also completely different.”
‘Them’ is Super Junior, the band I was in. Well, more of a group than a band, really. There were thirteen of us. Then it went to hell. was the only part that didn't really do it for me- it seems sort of melodramatic and thus harder to take seriously, but maybe it's just that they're named Super Junior(which is hardly your fault) and yeah. HAHAHAHAHA.
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Yay! I am really super glad that you like it. Because, yes, it is crack, but it is my first bandomy story so. I am maybe a little protective. Also, Pete. Pete. I love writing his texts and emails and total lack of attention to grammar and punctuation. Jon Walker gets all the funny in this fic, I swear. He's like "I WANT PRODUCE" and the rest of them are like "....okay. meet this korean guy!"
Yeah, I had trouble with that line. Still not satisfied with it. HOW DO I MADE THE BAND NAME SUPER JUNIOR SOUND SERIOUS? ALSO ARE THEY A BAND? NOT REALLY. THEY DON'T PLAY ANY INSTRUMENTS. And yeah, melodrama, augh.
THANK YOU FOR READING IT MOLLY I AM GLAD THAT YOU DID AND THAT YOU LIKE IT. ♥
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I sort of want a Sidekick now. Or an enV. I fail at text messaging (okay, I fail at anything that involves using a phone). Jon Walker gets all the everything. if I were having a potluck, he would bring the awesome.
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I know, me too. This fandom makes me want one. I am pretty good at texting though - it comes in handy in staying in touch without actually have to call anyone. Jon Walker is made of awesome, he doesn't even have to bring it.
Although, I do have to say that Spencer will always be my favorite. If that wasn't already obvious.
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I vaguely remembered a song or two of theirs, but it was nothing substantial. However, due to the fact that I’ve basically read and re-read all of your other stories (I kid you not) I figured fandom be damned, if addandsubtract wrote it, it must be good.
And man oh man, was I right about that one.
This story truly peaked my interest in Panic! (which then lead me to other FBR bands as well). I mean, there just aren’t words…
Seriously, I’ve been trying to manage a coherent comment since I first read it, which has turned out to be rather impossible, because I’m still reeling from the all the awesome.
I guess it’s just the way you write.
You do wonders with second person. I mean honestly. It’s breathtaking.
I remember reading “And the road a-winding goes” (which I’m also still reeling from, and it’s been a year) and just thinking WOW. It was just so incredible. The relationship. The emotions. Everything was just on ( ... )
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