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Dec 12, 2006 22:31

Compliments of
Super Junior (KiTeuk, KiChul)
1,376 words. Third person. R. Mostly plotless.

( The bottle on the table has about a half inch of liquid in it, clear like water, and the dirty cups scattered around it are mostly empty and sticky, gaudy plastic colors in blue and orange and green. )

fandom: super junior, pairing: eeteuk/kibum, pairing: heechul/kibum

Comments 43

nekomelly December 13 2006, 03:01:49 UTC

&heart KiTeuk
The boys should get drunk more often if it makes them kiss (and other stuff)
Aww, Hankyung is afraid of what might happen to him if he get drunk? ^__^

bunengshuode December 13 2006, 03:12:07 UTC

.................I totally put down bets on Heechul leaving to molest Hankyung. XD.

addandsubtract December 13 2006, 03:18:12 UTC

..... ME TOO. That is totally what Hannie is worried about. Or that KiChul would double-team him. :D

bunengshuode December 13 2006, 03:19:24 UTC

..........AHAHAHA. OH HANKYUNG. POOR KID. I BET THEY TOTALLY DO ALL THE TIME. XDDD. *KIND OF WANTS THE CINHAN CONTINUATION OF THIS NOW*

Thread 9

bunengshuode December 13 2006, 03:11:09 UTC

LKJAFLSDKFJALKDFS. OHMYGOD. *SQUEALS ALL OVER YOU* HEECHUL. KIBUM. EETEUK. EETEUK BEING ALL CLINGY. OHMYGOD. I HAVE NO COHERENCE FOR THIS RIGHT NOW EXCEPT THAT IT IS SO FUCKING SEXY AND HOT AND LKAJSDFKLASJD. I WILL BE BACK LATER WITH A BRAIN.

bunengshuode December 13 2006, 14:30:25 UTC

but he feels eerily calm, slow motion,

This sets the tone for the entire fic--it feels like one long drawn out breath, just so serene and erotic. Really tense in a touch-sensitive kind of way.

Heechul giggles, sliding off of the couch onto Sungmin, who is sprawled on the floor on his stomach, in-between the couch and the coffee table. Eeteuk watches from the chair in the corner, grin enigmatic and slightly off.

The random cinamin in this is adorably snuggly. ♥ and I love how teukie and kibum are both just a little off, the alcohol pushing them past their comfort zone of smiles and facade

“Kibum,” Heechul says, vibrating in place, energy tingling from him like static electricity, dry and sharp.

That's such a pretty description, and I love how Heechul's so wired, while Kibum is all mellow and drawn out.

“You should kiss Eeteuk.” His voice is bright, cheerful like it isn’t when he’s sober, and Kibum glances at Eeteuk, whose grin tells him nothing, just like always.And how Kibum's like, hmm, everything seems so normal, but yet. He's ( ... )

bunengshuode December 13 2006, 14:39:12 UTC

“Yeah,” he says, even if he isn’t quite sure why he’s agreeing so readily.*grins* I wonder if Kibum's lassitude when he's drunk has ever gotten him into trouble. I sort of think Heechul would have first discovered it by accident, and maybe that's how they became friends. XD ( ... )

addandsubtract December 13 2006, 19:01:00 UTC

I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT AND THAT IT MAKES SENSE AND THINGS. OKAY.

The random cinamin in this is adorably snuggly. ♥ and I love how teukie and kibum are both just a little off, the alcohol pushing them past their comfort zone of smiles and facade
I think that Eeteuk would be a quiet smiley drunk, where you can tell that there is something off, but not quite what that is. I find Kibum and Eeteuk so interesting, because they both have that smiling habit, and getting them drunk throws that off a little.

Ahahahaha. Oh Kibum, and how Heechul's just touching himself. alkdfjlasdf. Heechul's so sexual even when he's not really trying, it's just his default setting.
It really is. I mean, out of all of them he strikes me as the most sexual, and that would only get worse as he gets more drunk. And Kibum is like "um....sure!" I love writing him drunk.

I wonder if Kibum's lassitude when he's drunk has ever gotten him into trouble. I sort of think Heechul would have first discovered it by accident, and maybe that's how they became friends.I ( ... )

Thread 7

dearyourstruly December 13 2006, 04:28:27 UTC

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh. 8DDDDDDDDD
This was hot.
Hot and smexy like fogged up windows in a car. D:
Fireball hot.
SUN HOT OMFG. XD

KICHUL AND KITEUK WIN AT LIFE. :DD
AND SO DO YOU FOR WRITING THIS. 8DDDb

addandsubtract December 13 2006, 18:47:11 UTC

Ahahahaha, thank you! I am glad that you like it! :D This is, like, the closest I get to smut.

KiTeuk is so addictive. I just can't help writing them! And Heechul, well. He gets to be my catalyst. Thank you for commenting!

hizumis_crotch December 13 2006, 04:35:28 UTC

I agree there should be a follow up of just where Heechul is going, even though it seems we all already know XD
I feel bad for poor Kangin and Min, what if they happen to wake up during Kibum and Eeteuks playing? poor boys...

addandsubtract December 13 2006, 18:48:29 UTC

Actually, I agree with you, and I wrote Heechul's follow up. I'm going to post it when I have a few free minutes later. :D Poor Hannie, ahahahaha.

I'm sure Kangin and Min would enjoy the view? Well, Kangin would enjoy it, and Sungmin would get embarrassed and run away.

bunengshuode December 13 2006, 19:25:32 UTC

Oh pfft! Kangin would start molesting him or something, because he'd feel left out. ^_^

addandsubtract December 13 2006, 20:07:54 UTC

Ahahahahahaha, so true!

shintotchi December 13 2006, 04:46:09 UTC

When you write it, there doesn't have to be a plot. What am I doing here? I'm not a KiTeukker, but...I ....can't resist. XD It was beautiful. I tried. My inner KiChul cried out, but the KiTeuk was good. *shakes head* You're good.

addandsubtract December 13 2006, 18:50:01 UTC

There was, um, a little KiChul? :D Sorry, but KiTeuk won out in the end, sort of. And then Heechul buggers off to molest Hannie, probably. I'm glad that you like it though! It is really, really plotless, ahahaha. It's nice to write plotless stories sometimes, actually.