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Super Junior (KiTeuk, KiChul)
1,376 words. Third person. R. Mostly plotless.
( The bottle on the table has about a half inch of liquid in it, clear like water, and the dirty cups scattered around it are mostly empty and sticky, gaudy plastic colors in blue and orange and green. )
Super Junior (KiTeuk, KiChul)
1,376 words. Third person. R. Mostly plotless.
( The bottle on the table has about a half inch of liquid in it, clear like water, and the dirty cups scattered around it are mostly empty and sticky, gaudy plastic colors in blue and orange and green. )
This sets the tone for the entire fic--it feels like one long drawn out breath, just so serene and erotic. Really tense in a touch-sensitive kind of way.
Heechul giggles, sliding off of the couch onto Sungmin, who is sprawled on the floor on his stomach, in-between the couch and the coffee table. Eeteuk watches from the chair in the corner, grin enigmatic and slightly off.
The random cinamin in this is adorably snuggly. ♥ and I love how teukie and kibum are both just a little off, the alcohol pushing them past their comfort zone of smiles and facade
“Kibum,” Heechul says, vibrating in place, energy tingling from him like static electricity, dry and sharp.
That's such a pretty description, and I love how Heechul's so wired, while Kibum is all mellow and drawn out.
“You should kiss Eeteuk.” His voice is bright, cheerful like it isn’t when he’s sober, and Kibum glances at Eeteuk, whose grin tells him nothing, just like always.
And how Kibum's like, hmm, everything seems so normal, but yet. He's just so mellow and so agreeable it's so cute. XD.
“Because I want you to,” Heechul says like it’s the most obvious thing in the world, and maybe to him it is. Kibum fits his hands into the waist of Heechul’s jeans, hooking his fingers into the belt loops and Heechul licks the corner of Kibum’s mouth, white teeth flashing, scraping, nipping. Kibum moans and lets Heechul kiss him, sloppy like nothing matters, cranberry and orange on his tongue, tang left over from earlier. Heechul bites into Kibum’s bottom lip and sucks, Kibum’s fingers tightening in the loops of his jeans. When Heechul pulls back, grinning, he lets his hands fall back down to his sides, fingernails scraping softly over the Kibum’s cheeks.
I love love love all your description but this particular passage really does it for me; it's just so hot and graceful. The movement is very intent, and it's wonderfully sexy and I can almost feel the touches, it's so intense. ♥
“Okay,” Kibum says, breathless, because, sure, why not, and he grins at Eeteuk with swollen lips, standing unsteadily. He looks over his shoulder, glancing at Heechul on the couch, curled up on his side and giggling, running his fingers over his own stomach through his shirt.
Ahahahaha. Oh Kibum, and how Heechul's just touching himself. alkdfjlasdf. Heechul's so sexual even when he's not really trying, it's just his default setting, *loves all over you*
Kibum is curled up between Eeteuk’s legs, almost kneeling, and his hand cups the back of Eeteuk’s neck, pulling him forward. His teeth sink into Eeteuk’s bottom lip, and then they’re kissing, wet and messy and drunk. Kibum can taste the trace of alcohol, lime green and bitter, on Eeteuk’s tongue, and when Eeteuk’s fingers press up Kibum’s spine, Kibum gasps against his lips. and then how it cumulates in not wanting to breathe, not wanting anything but to be closer.
So, so pretty. The distance and space here is just lovely, moving closer and closer until there isn't any left, and it's just the two of them and touching. So poignant.
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*grins* I wonder if Kibum's lassitude when he's drunk has ever gotten him into trouble. I sort of think Heechul would have first discovered it by accident, and maybe that's how they became friends. XD.
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Heechul is only halfway to being completely drunk, but it's enough, the alcohol smoothing out rough corners of unfamiliarity. Donghae's passed out next to him already, his breaths slow and even, his shirt tangled around his fingers, revealing flat skin that tempts, and Heechul imagines pressing his mouth to Donghae's stomach, wonders if a sharp nip at the sensitive skin would be enough to wake him. But Heechul merely lets his fingers trace over Donghae's hand, pulls the fabric back down.
"What?" he snaps, catching Kibum looking at them, rude, assuming Kibum who addressed him so familiarly when they just met, Kibum who thinks he can smooth everything over with that genial smile, as if the world is such an easy place.
"Nothing," Kibum replies, his eyes slow to look away, and Heechul wonders just how drunk the kid is.
"C'mere," Heechul murmurs experimentally, drawing his fingers down his legs, and Kibum stumbles over complacently, sitting carefully in Heechul's lap, so close Heechul can taste the bitter soju on his lips, his breaths thick and heavy with it.
Heechul shifts comfortably, letting Kibum lean against his shoulder, his lashes short but pretty over his eyes, and Heechul doesn't so much think about kissing him as he thinks about the spread of soft skin under his hands, Kibum's shirt loose and pliant as his limbs, giving way where Heechul tugs and pushes at them.
"Mmm," Kibum murmurs, reaching back and touching fingertips to Heechul's face, slow and measured, as if he is memorizing the outline of his features, and Heechul smiles indulgently, tasting Kibum's fingers when they slide past his mouth, his skin citrusy with the hint of lime.
Kibum isn't smiling now, but his expression is intent, open, and Heechul realizes there's more to the kid than just that, the default reaction only a mechanism for self-defense, when it's so clear how vulnerable he is.
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“Do you,” Kibum starts, almost uncertainly, but gets distracted by Eeteuk’s lips on the back of his neck, the hint of teeth, the heat of exhaled air. He shivers, presses back, watches Heechul’s face, the suggestion of his smirk, the curl of his fingers behind his back.
XD. And Kibum's all confused and wondering what Heechul's up to and ahaha, Heechul's just like *beams!*. So cute.
“Have fun,” Heechul says, and blows Kibum a kiss, gaudy and grinning, before he turns back down the hallway, swaggering steps that sway more with attitude than anything else.
Ahahaha. Oh Heechul. Sooo made of fail. I like how he's so overexaggerrated, that being drunk makes him more showy, it's very appropriate.
“Kibum,” Eeteuk says against slightly wet skin, breath a whisper, “stay with me.”
“Yeah,” Kibum says, pressing his face against Eeteuk’s shoulder, mouthing the bare skin there, open mouthed kisses. “Okay.”
And that's just such a perfect ending. So so sweet and fitting.
NOW WHERE IS THE CONTINUATION MADDY MY LOVE? YOU TEASE ME WITH IT AND THEN YOU LEAVE ME!
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The random cinamin in this is adorably snuggly. ♥ and I love how teukie and kibum are both just a little off, the alcohol pushing them past their comfort zone of smiles and facade
I think that Eeteuk would be a quiet smiley drunk, where you can tell that there is something off, but not quite what that is. I find Kibum and Eeteuk so interesting, because they both have that smiling habit, and getting them drunk throws that off a little.
Ahahahaha. Oh Kibum, and how Heechul's just touching himself. alkdfjlasdf. Heechul's so sexual even when he's not really trying, it's just his default setting.
It really is. I mean, out of all of them he strikes me as the most sexual, and that would only get worse as he gets more drunk. And Kibum is like "um....sure!" I love writing him drunk.
I wonder if Kibum's lassitude when he's drunk has ever gotten him into trouble. I sort of think Heechul would have first discovered it by accident, and maybe that's how they became friends.
I have no doubt the Heechul, once he found out about it, took advantage of Kibum many a time. Kibum should know better than to get drunk with Heechul.
And I love love love your ficlet. It seems just like what would have happened the first time they got drunk together.
"Mmm," Kibum murmurs, reaching back and touching fingertips to Heechul's face, slow and measured, as if he is memorizing the outline of his features, and Heechul smiles indulgently, tasting Kibum's fingers when they slide past his mouth, his skin citrusy with the hint of lime.
This is just such a hot image, and I love how slow Kibum is to move, how careful he is when he's drunk.
Kibum isn't smiling now, but his expression is intent, open, and Heechul realizes there's more to the kid than just that, the default reaction only a mechanism for self-defense, when it's so clear how vulnerable he is.
Ugh, this is so true about Kibum. His smile, while not so much fake, is a self-defense mechanism. It keeps people out just as readily as a bad additude would, except that it's less obvious.
And yay about the ending! Because I worry about endings so much it's not funny.
AND I AM DONE WITH THE CONTINUATION, AND WILL POST IT A LITTLE LATER, I PROMISE. I JUST HAVE TO WATCH HOUSE WITH MY ROOMIE NOW. BUT THEN I WILL POST.
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Yes, exactly! They both have these veneers that aren't quite true, and getting drunk throws them off just that much. XD. KiTeuk drunk are just such fun in general, all squishy and cute and things. XD.
Ah, well. Kibum probably knows that Heechul means well, so he doesn't mind. I see them having a very open relationship, where hormones are seperate from emotion, and it's just very free and not messy or clingy.
XD. I see drunk Kibum as being very languid, all happy and content with everything.
It keeps people out just as readily as a bad additude would, except that it's less obvious.
Yes, exactly! Which is probably why he and Heechul get along so well now that they've established their own brands of BS won't work with each other.
♥ It's a lovely fitting ending~!
OKAY. I AWAIT IT EAGERLY. ENJOY HOUSE.
.....and randomly, I totally want to write a Suju Heroes fusion, with Heechul as The Cheerleader, Donghae his loser friend, Jaejoong as Jackie, LSM as the dad, Sungmin as Captain Wannabe, Kibum as Isaac, Shiwon as Simone, Kyuhyun as Sylar (of course), Eeteuk as Eden, Kangin as the Hiatian, HyukSu as Niki/Jessica........can you tell I've been thinking about this a bit too much?
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AND NOW I GO TO POST THE OTHER ONE.
...Just what I need, another au of DOOM. But I love Heroes so much, and I think it could work. But who would be Ando and Hiro? And Peter! And Nathan!
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Sungmin is Peter! I just like to call him Captain Wannabe, which totally works for Sungmin as well. Shindong would be Hiro and Hankyung would be Ando, and Ryeo would be Mohinder, and Yehsung would be the weird creepy dream kid. But I have no idea who Nathan would be. Changmin? And Yoochun would be random police guy. XD.
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