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Super Junior (KiTeuk)
1,344 words. PG-13. Second person. For k0uryuu in return for the KiHan she wrote me. &hearts!
( The tea is almost hot enough to burn your tongue, smooth and green. )
Super Junior (KiTeuk)
1,344 words. PG-13. Second person. For k0uryuu in return for the KiHan she wrote me. &hearts!
( The tea is almost hot enough to burn your tongue, smooth and green. )
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Ahaha, I love how Kibum smiles, because it's his default setting, and I completely agree with how it's not fake, but it's not true either, because I really think the reason Kibum's smile works so well is that it's a genuine smile; it doesn't feel practiced and fake, but he smiles so much that his personality has become subsumed by that smile. Which is really interesting.
He smiles back, then, and gives you a one shouldered shrug. You watch his eyes crinkle at the corners, the dimple that’s hard to miss.
I love this, how they both have these set reactions, Kibum with his smile and Eeteuk with his cute, and how somehow the two cancel out when they do it to each other. Very neat.
“Take a shower and warm up,” he says as he stands, careless of the book, which falls to the floor with a thump. He stretches, back arching, flash of skin between ( ... )
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I love this, because it's so true, but such a pretty way of putting it. And the metaphorical level of how Kibum can't get the knots and tangles out.
voice rusty and thick like molasses, webbed with sleep.
This is a really nice image too, it feels so slow and heavy, like it is.
The wood floor is cold under your butt, but you’ve slept on it already with no sore muscles, so you think you could get used to it.
This is really interesting too, how Kibum is all laaaazy, and not sore. think I will just sleep here. I feel like that's how his smile works too; it's all Kibum being lazy, and letting what works work.
The cushions are magic on your cold thighs, and you sigh. Eeteuk’s feet are under your hip, but you don’t care, curling up against the armrest and letting your eyes fall shut.
And this is just so adorable with Kibum being all snuggly and "oh fine" finally sort of accepting being touched. He's so sleepy and cuddly here. *awwww*
You can ( ... )
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This is different, it isn’t new. But you know that you’re lying to yourself.
Awww, Kibum. Finally going to admit that Eeteuk's been hitting on you? XD.
Eeteuk grins, and you can feel the hum of it on your fingers, red orange hot.
Mmm, this is just deliciously pretty imagery. I especially like the red orange hot, it conveys the sense of shades of heat really well.
when your first response isn’t to pull away but to lean in, you decide you don’t feel like questioning
Aww, Kibum. Kibum is so instinctive, it's really quite interesting. I never thought about it like that, but he does have such a careful balance of instinct and control, like the smile is about control, but motivated by instinct, because it tends to produce set reactions from people, reactions Kibum knows how to respond to.
You kiss him, bite at the corner of his lips, slide your tongue into his mouth. He doesn’t seem surprised. He pushes you more firmly against the back of the couch, and he runs his fingers over your stomach, and he smiles as he kisses you.And I ( ... )
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Wow. D:
How beautifully gorgeous. <33 KiTeuk just earned lots of points for me. x333 And has opened up a whole new world. XDD
Too awesome for me to even try to explain. xD Great job. ;]
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Thank you for the comment! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :D
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This was lovely, and sweet, and cute, and gorgeous. And it's that last line that just got me most, hook, line and sinker. Oh Maddy *_*! ♥
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♥! Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥
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Thank you for writing~~~! ♥♥
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What KiTeuk did you guys write? I'd so be interested in reading. :D
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It's so sweet and very well written. ♥KiTeuk
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I absolutely loved waking up to this.
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