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Sep 22, 2006 00:49

Title: Still Fighting It
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: KyuMin
Rating: R? Maybe?
Disclaimer: I don't own.
Summary: It's not working.
Notes: 2,015 words. Second and third POV, both. Angst? Sort of? AU.

Still Fighting It )

fandom: super junior, pairing: kyuhyun/sungmin

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quiet_morning September 22 2006, 15:05:51 UTC
I don't know what to say *is just so sad now*.... omg I feel for them both. So sad.. just so sad.... kyumin is supposed to be HAPPY! ;_;

By the way you write is always pure genius truelly ♥!

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addandsubtract September 22 2006, 21:11:57 UTC
Don't be sad! Being sad is not fun. At least they have each other? (Ahahaha, I have written two KyuMin's now, and neither of them are happy. Then again, I guess most of my writing is not happy. Oh well! :D)

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you like it! ♥

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scylladakylla September 22 2006, 16:52:55 UTC
Damn you, why must you always write so well and wrench my heart out each time. ♥ That was amazing. The characters were amazing. They may not be like that in real life, but the characters are so consistent and real and you CAN see Sungmin, a more fucked up Sungmin, you can see Kyuhyun really being those people. Agh.

Haemin, interesting. I hope he cheated on Min with Hyuk, though that's not the point of the story at all. =X

♥♥♥♥♥♥

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addandsubtract September 22 2006, 21:15:42 UTC
I could, um, try to put your heart back in? ♥ Ahaha, anyway, I'm glad that you like it! And that the characterizations seemed consistant. I don't know what possessed me to make Sungmin psychotic, but at least he's consistant, right? Ahahaha. And Kyuhyun, I think that this fic shows how I would actually characterize him normally. I haven't written him enough to know, but that would be my guess.

HaeMin just seemed like the thing to do. I didn't have anyone in mind, so believe what you will!

♥♥♥

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kelseypaige September 22 2006, 19:10:53 UTC
IM AT SCHOOL. IN ACCOUNTING CLASS, WHAT!
I READ THIS WTF. IN SCHOOL.

Which is probably why I dont get who "you" is and omg you switching from 3rd to 2nd person messed with my brain.

BUT NEWMIN. YAYkindof.
But I'm confused why is this angst, because isnt the end happy. It's CUTE AT THE END. New takes care of Min *__* Awe.

okay I'll shut up and start working on debits and credits now.

ILUMADDY♥

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addandsubtract September 22 2006, 21:18:35 UTC
YOU ARE WEIRD, WTF. WHY ARE YOU READING MY FIC IN CLASS. IT TOTALLY DESERVES YOUR UNDIVIDED ATTENTION.

And yeah, I agree with that. It might make more sense if you weren't in accounting. Not sure about that, though.

You don't even like it anymore, you traitor! Which is why there's a kindof, I guess.

Um, I guess it's angst cause it's really fucked up? Their whole thing is kinda fucked up. BUT WHATEVAH.

GO! DO YOUR WORK!

PS ILUTOONHACA ♥

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fether September 23 2006, 11:16:13 UTC
What a wonderful fic! ♥ It's the kind of story I had to read a couple of times just to let it all settle down over myself, especially the ending. The characterisation, Kyu's voice, the tone... it all fits together wonderfully. And the 'leftover love' part makes my heart fall out, it's so sad. ;_; I don't think you had a problem at all with the sections not fitting together! It works so well because it seems to true. But, guhhhh. I loved it.

...I sound so gushingly silly. xD <333

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addandsubtract September 23 2006, 15:49:52 UTC
Wow, thank you so much! ♥ Thanks for having the patience to reread a few times, ahahaha. I really wasn't sure that it would all make sense, so I'm always relieved to hear that it does. I love writing Kyuhyun like this, this characterizatin of him just makes sense to me. I didn't always know what was going on with Sungmin in this fic, but I always knew what Kyuhyun was thinking. :D I am glad that you liked it!

No you don't! And silly isn't a bad thing at all. :D

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zepix September 25 2006, 03:11:05 UTC
oooh...unhappy couple.
If Sungmin's being like that.
All I wishing is just Kyu will be right there next to him

But.. why I felt a bit scent of happy thing from that?? - -

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addandsubtract September 25 2006, 06:36:20 UTC
Kyu will stick around, don't worry. He can't get away at this point. :D Thanks for the comment, I'm glad that you like it!

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