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Title: Still Fighting It
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: KyuMin
Rating: R? Maybe?
Disclaimer: I don't own.
Summary: It's not working.
Notes: 2,015 words. Second and third POV, both. Angst? Sort of? AU.

Comments

[shonen_key]

*marks her place* I'll read now.

[shonen_key]

.... *sobs*

Yep, Sungmin's a little frucked up here, *sigh* but whatever happens, Kyu will be right at his side, right? *pokes*

[addandsubtract]

Er. Yeah. I don't know why, exactly, but yeah. Fucked up. And Kyunhyun is stuck with him for the duration, for better or for worse, ahahaha. He's really got no choice in the matter! :D

[shonen_key]

...I just realized I typed 'frucked' up. XD

[candymint]

WHAT.THE.FUCK.

O_O

i don't know what to say. it makes me`sad. very very sad. but i guess that's a compliment, that you can toy with my emotions with your angsty writing DAMN YOU

[addandsubtract]

Er. Um. I'm sorry?

I KNOW YOU LOVE SUNGMIN BUT UM. I don't know. I have less and less control over what I write. Don't be sad! Kyuhyun will, um, take care of him!

[candymint]

don't be sorry T_T i think it was amazing really! it's just...hard for me to read Sungmin portrayed like this ;-; (because he's just like my stupid ex-gf who should die >.> )
and of course! it will all work out and they will be mentally healthy one day and hold hands and skip through meadows. oh i can see it now.
<3
but it's awesome how you can write effed up people in such a believable way that i wonder if i should be worried about you XD <3

[addandsubtract]

I understand. He's your favorite! You are allowed to be biased and things. And I screwed him up real bad. But at least he's not alone and broken! It will all work out. Possibly. Maybe. Um, be optimistic? ♥

Ahahahaha, I am glad they are believable. Aaaaaand I dunno if you should be worried about me or not, but I haven't broken any plates yet, at least. :D

[wishpaper]

have I ever told you that your characterizations are amazing? spot. on. amazing. and it may not be how we always see then written, especially sungmin, but that doesn't matter at all because hey, it's about time someone recognized what a crazy bitch the kid is, and I'm so glad it was you. :]

generally, the way you write is just gorgeous. I want your talent, dammit. oh, the angst. ♥

[addandsubtract]

!!! Yay. I'm really glad that the characterizations seemed right to you, especially considering that Sungmin is you favorite (er, if I remember correctly) and all I did with him was fuck him up and make him crazy. So, thank you for that.

I'm glad that you like it! And I'm pretty sure you don't need whatever talent I have. ♥

[taylormercury]

Oh dear God. I think I'm actually speechless. This was ... this was horrible and angsty but absolutely perfect. Your characterizations were incredible, and I thought the placing/pace of the segments worked fine, they kept me completely hooked right until the end, and then when I got there I was like "that's it? Damn."

I just ... I don't even know what else to say. Anything you write always leaves me so ... guuuuuh. ily and the things you write, even when they break my heart ♥

[addandsubtract]

Thank you so much. ily! ♥ ::tapes heart back together::

I am so so so glad that you like this. It's so weird and I don't know. I wasn't sure how it was going to turn out as I was writing it. So yay for the segments making sense and I'm glad that the characterizations make sense and just. Yay. Thank you for liking it and being speechless.

[kyuppuccino]

I love it, I love the angst, and I love your Kyuhyun.
I would love to comment more but I'm running late for a test so I better rush off. -_- I'll be back later, I just HAD to comment!

fvhgfddfgfdhdfhghd kyuhyun

and yes, the sections fit together just perfectly!

[addandsubtract]

Thank you! I love writing Kyuhyun so much. ♥ He's so much fun to make cold and distant, and I have no idea why.

Ahahah good luck on your test!

I'm glad. I'm glad that it all made sense to you. Thanks for the comment!