A/R REMIX: "Lawfully His"

[aka_plynn]

Title: Lawfully His
Rating: PG-13
Original fic: Nine-Tenths of the Law
Original author: aka_plynn

Comments

[mellow_mel]

Poor LEE!!! He might not be killed by his dad, but embarrassed to near DEATH would be more like it!
I kept thinking if Tory had been around she could have found a more suitable lay "alternate Bill" for Laura on colonial day... LMAO!

[aka_plynn]

I am so glad I'm home now and could read this! I've been dying all day at work, waiting to get home and open this up.

I truly love your Bill POV here for so many reasons. You nailed it, exactly how I'd hoped he came off in the first story. The fact that he was falling for her on Colonial Day, why he was so worried she'd slept with Lee on his ship, just everything. I adored seeing this scene through his eyes.

Awesome job!

[afrakaday]

I'm glad you chose this fic to remix, mystery author! Such a delightfully salacious storyline, and I love this take on it. Very satisfying to see them resolve their conflict. :)

[larsfarm77]

I love that you chose this -- this is one of the first I'd ever read by aka_plynn, I loved it so much, and you've added to it beautifully.

It's amazing to be inside Bill's head like this. There's a wonderful inevitability to everything as we see Bill's internal fight to stay angry with Laura while longing to give in to her.

Loved this description of Laura:

How many people had underestimated her, had chalked her up as soft only to learn that Laura Roslin was made of fire and ice? She would burn you either way.

Great stuff!

[wishflsinfl]

Angry, confused Bill is one of my favorite versions, especially when it's Laura that's gotten him all worked up. I love this line:

When he was done with her she would never think of going to Lee again.

You go, Old Man. :D