Merry (belated) Christmas allwhowander121!

Dec 28, 2008 00:30

Title: They Just Work
Character(s)/Pairing: Rayne
Prompt: weapon cleaning; fire and ice
Written For: allwhowander121, for my 25 Fics of Christmas. Hope ya like it!
Rating: G
Word Count: 607
Disclaimer: Not mine!
-Author Notes: Yay! Got it done. I actually wrote another bit first, but forgot to incorporate "fire and ice", so this took a little longer than I'd ( Read more... )

character: malcolm reynolds, genre: general, character: simon tam, genre: fluff, length: 501-1000 words, misc.: prompt fic, misc.: 25 fics of christmas, fandom: firefly, pairing: river/jayne, character: river tam, genre: friendshippy, character: jayne cobb, rating: g

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Comments 14

turtle_goose December 28 2008, 07:28:07 UTC
This is fantastic! I love reading Jayne/River from the crew's point of view. And I love it when you write Simon and Mal.

Great job on this!

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an_ardent_rain December 28 2008, 07:45:27 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! :) I really like reading from the crew's point of view, as well. And I love writing Simon. Heh. Mal I always feel a little shaky on, so I'm glad that I did all right. Hee. I'm glad you enjoyed it; thanks again!

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sunshineali December 28 2008, 08:02:02 UTC
Absolutely fab. :)Ali

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an_ardent_rain December 28 2008, 08:06:42 UTC
Ahh! Thank you so much; glad you enjoyed it!

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idyllictorture December 28 2008, 09:21:06 UTC
This was very cute. I like Mal's observation about how they're both children. I've always thought that myself. And Jayne saying there weren't any other options. A very Jayne like thing to say. And a very River like reaction to it.

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an_ardent_rain December 28 2008, 09:43:36 UTC
Ahh, thank you so much! Hee. Yes, I have to agree - one thing that I think really works in this pairing's favor is the fact that they are both so childlike. Hee. Glad you liked it; and thanks again for the comment! :)

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willow_reece December 28 2008, 09:36:46 UTC
LMAO! Hee. Simon will just never understand. I loved this, ♥

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an_ardent_rain December 28 2008, 09:44:54 UTC
Tee hee. Thanks for the comment! Oh, I know; poor Simon, unable to wrap his head around it. As much as I love him, I love messing with him in fics - it's so amusing to see him go all "protective brother". Heh. Glad you liked and thanks again! :)

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alsunwunderland December 28 2008, 17:36:43 UTC
I love Mals' attempt to console Simon: "Think of it this way, though; ain’t like albatross’s mate for life.” LMAO! Maybe albatrosses don't, but Merc and Moonbrains do.

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an_ardent_rain December 28 2008, 17:52:53 UTC
Hee. Thanks for the comment! :)

Yes - I see Mal as being completely horrible at making people feel better, so that always amuses me to put in. Glad you liked my little attempt at humor; it made me laugh a lot, too.

Thanks again!

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forwardish December 30 2008, 06:51:52 UTC
SQUEE! Love it!!! XD
Thanks hun, off to read the other one :)

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an_ardent_rain December 31 2008, 03:11:24 UTC
You're very welcome! I'm glad you liked it. Hee.

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