Comments | abvj: "It's a beautiful day to save lives. Let's have some fun."

abvj

"It's a beautiful day to save lives. Let's have some fun."

May 25, 2010 16:00

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lexiesloan May 24 2010, 22:45:59 UTC

Honestly, I know the writers that are probably going to be participating and they intimidate the hell out of me so I think I'll just stick to reading this time.

Mark/Lexie, back to brunette

Back to Black Mark/Lexie distant_lines May 27 2010, 21:42:30 UTC

You're lying on the couch, your head on his lap, your feet tangled beneath your exhausted body. You don't quite know how much time is passing as you drift in and out of consciousness, completely sedated by his fingers idly rubbing shapes on the inside of your wrist that's resting on your hip ( ... )

Re: Back to Black Mark/Lexie step86 May 27 2010, 23:52:36 UTC

After he's done he just stares at you, an almost nostalgic look in his eyes.

Love so much this line!
Great job!

Re: Back to Black Mark/Lexie distant_lines May 28 2010, 00:34:59 UTC

Thank you! The last line was my favorite part, so I'm glad you loved it.

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waltzmatildah May 25 2010, 00:45:09 UTC

Because I'm feeling schmoopy about these two...

Alex and Mark - saviour

violet1979 May 25 2010, 12:39:48 UTC

I second that prompt, very much. (Might even have tried myself but am way too shy to dare post it here ;)

waltzmatildah May 25 2010, 12:43:35 UTC

Oh, trust me, no need to be shy at all here! We're all mates. You don't have to write anything but don't be worried about posting if you do (and especially don't be worried if it's got Alex in it, because I, for one, am pretty much guaranteed to love it!)

abvj May 25 2010, 13:47:31 UTC

I second her comment. Don't be shy! We're don't bite! I'd love for you to write it!

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waltzmatildah May 25 2010, 00:45:50 UTC

Alex/Meredith - catalyst

waltzmatildah May 25 2010, 00:46:22 UTC

Percy/Reed - unrequited

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Re: missing persons, percy/reed, pg waltzmatildah May 27 2010, 07:11:28 UTC

Oh, wow. This is perfect. The mood you've created is so... still? I love the flow of this, there's an underlying peace and, considering how they died, it's the least they deserve.

Awesome, awesome, awesome. Thank you so much for such an eloquent prompt response.

Re: missing persons, percy/reed, pg abvj May 28 2010, 00:48:12 UTC

I used to be an avid reader of yours (I doubt you remember, but I so fangirled you writing in a non-creepy way) and this is why. The mood you set here is so haunting and beautiful at the same time. The way you write the interactions and the soft touches, and feeling for heartbeats and pulses. SO, SO, good.

waltzmatildah May 25 2010, 00:47:20 UTC

Alex/Lexie - hypervigilance

Stay, Alex/Lexie, PG rorylie May 27 2010, 22:57:37 UTC

She couldn’t leave him ( ... )

Re: Stay, Alex/Lexie, PG abvj May 28 2010, 00:49:27 UTC

She wasn’t there for him when he really needed her, even if she knew she couldn’t have done much if anything to change things, but she was there now, she could watch over him now, and maybe, somehow, that would be enough.

That line is SO Lexie. This was great. Thanks for sharing!

Re: Stay, Alex/Lexie, PG rorylie May 28 2010, 02:54:39 UTC

Thank you! I was so nervous to post it.

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