Nocturne [Byakuya/Hisana]

[overtoned]

Title: Nocturne
Author: Overtoned
Genre: Canon Interpretation
Rating: PG-13, may be mature themes.
Words: 4018
Pairing: Byakuya/Hisana, bits of Kaien/Miyako
Author's Note: This is one of the fifty thousand fics I am going to owe Trinity, the artist of that amazing Isshin and Urahara Victorian Times drawing. Longest fic I had ever written. I must've

Comments

[overtoned]

:O. Thanks! *is extremely honored*
♥

[windxalchemist]

*dies*
ByaHisa. That was win. :D
It's so serene, quiet. And very one sided, it makes me cry. T-T
One can almost understand why he's always so...pinched faced I did NOT just say pinched face half the time, it's so sad.
I really like the icon that ancha_289 very befitting of the last part when she dies.
Your fic is so quiet and very soft. It's like a mom telling her children a sad story. Good word choice, and it gives a good explanation as to why Hisana said, "I'm sorry," before she died.
loving!Byakuya. how so very...romantic? ahah ^^;
*dies again*

[overtoned]

XDDD
I'm glad you liked it. It was hell on wheels trying to imagine what she went through, so I'm glad it turned out somewhat convincing. :D

Peace

[anonymous]

I can die in peace now. Jazzy, to you I leave all my art and from the grave I'm instilling the love of ByaHisa in you. *dies*

DID IT EAT YOUR SOUL IN A GOOD WAY WITH THE PIECES CHEWED PROPERLY OR BAD WAY WITH GULPING THINGS DOWN WITHOUT TASTING IT??? (AND I THOUGHT I OWNED YOUR SOUL, BUT I'LL JUST STAKE A CLAIM ON A PIECE OF IT AND LEAVE IT AT THAT) :D :D

So. freaking. awesome. I am a bit sad that it ain't fluffy happy like I wish it would be (Lord knows I fill my brain with endless scenarios in which Byakuya and Hisana are perfectly alive and happily in love *winks*), but I know you did your absolute best, and it shows, dear! It's an amazing fic! I have this image of the blue-green sea with soft waves splashing quietly on the beach throughout reading it. I'm so proud and so flattered. ;_;

P.S.: Oh, and I have gathered almost everything needed for reference purposes and will soon embark on the Victorian!Bleach journey, just right after all my plans for this weekend are over. *thumbs up*

~ Trinity (Reply

Re: Peace

[overtoned]

>D You won't get ByaHisa happy from me. XDDDD

THIS IS A SUICIDAL JOURNEY I HOPE YOU REALIZE THIS.

<3

Re: Peace

[anonymous]

I have realized that and am resigned. But can't they be happy in Victorian Bleach??? *puppy eyes* I shall brainwash yooooooouuuuu. *injects voodoo doll with happy orange juice and sticks flowers all over it* XD

I HAVE REALIZED IT A LIFETIME AGO AND HENCE HAVE LEFT A WIILL ACCORDINGLY IN WHICH I WILL GET A SOFT FEATHERED BED WHICH WILL BE MY RESTING PLACE AFTER I BECOME A DECIMATED CORPSE. But seriously, I'm gonna buy a new sketchbook just for this, you know. :D *thumbs up*

~ Trinity

Re: Peace

[overtoned]

XDDDDDDDD

Whatever you want for your drawing. >D (Brainwash? oh ho ho bring it on!)

WILL?!?!? I NEED TO WRITE ONE TOO. :x

Yaye sketchbook. >D [That's a lot of drawings.]

[shleaf_fl]

[overtoned]

:DDDDDDDD

It's so good to know that it's believable. :> Thaaaanks!

[schweinsty]

Oh, that was really good! Really sad, too, but mostly really good. And it just explains everything so well - I think they should make it cannon :). Very nicely done :D.

[overtoned]

:D Thanks.

I honestly think Kaien picked up Hisana. I can't imagine Byakuya in Inuzuri... :x