I liked this update a lot. XD There are some grammar and spelling errors, yes, but that doesn’t stop the plot from being interesting and funny. I really like the way you introduced Nervous, and how you wrote Nervous in general. I think it’s creative and funny. XD I also was LingMAO at him gaying it up with Frances. Poor Frances. XD ALSO OMG I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE OF THE NERVOUS TWINS. :D They look adoooorable.
Of course, the lesbian orgies were amusing, too. ;P
YAY, GOOD REVIEW! :D I know my spellin' ain't the best, but this is for fun, right? And thankies for telling me what you thought could be improved, Pithy~
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D
THEY ARE SO FRACKING ADORABLE. Nervous is just so... pretty <3
Well, I don't have an explanation, but when Jerome and I get to talking she tells me why SHE thinks Kaylynn kills people, so maybe she'll have an answer? xD
I LOVE NERVOUS SO MUCH. THIS IS MY FAVORITE PART OF THE UPDATE: "Hi, I'm Nervous Subject and I'm out of my fucking mind!" he laughed, raising a hand playfully.
THE BABIES. I LOVE THEM. I LOVE THEM ALL SO HARD.
WELL. Kaylynn wouldn't want her dear, beloved Nervous seeing anyone other than herself, of course!
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And, uh, did they do what I think they did? FRANCES? ...RIP? :O
LESBIAN SEX
Great update!!
(Jerome rox.)
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FRANCES, R.I.P.
ORGY. GET IT RIGHT. BUT NO SEX ON A ROCK.
YAY!
(HE DOES, LIKE WOAH.)
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Of course, the lesbian orgies were amusing, too. ;P
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:D :D :D :D :D :D :D
THEY ARE SO FRACKING ADORABLE. Nervous is just so... pretty <3
I was hoping somebody would like that!
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I LOVE HIM. AND THE BABIES ARE SO CUTE.
Why did Frances have to die, poor baby! :(
Great Update! :D
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THE BABIES. I LOVE THEM. I LOVE THEM ALL SO HARD.
WELL. Kaylynn wouldn't want her dear, beloved Nervous seeing anyone other than herself, of course!
YAY! :D
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