LOTS Fic: Aydindril Burning 6/? (Cara/Kahlan)

[a1066]

Adrenaline overtook arousal as her intimate connection with Cara was broken. She rolled off the table, clutching what was left of her clothes around her. Kahlan grew up in rural Montana, she recognized the sound of high caliber rifle shots when she heard them. Cara hadn’t been completely paranoid - someone was trying to kill her. Kahlan would feel

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[chaotic_fuse81]

Oh, dear. Richard. Well, I guess it's a good thing he was there to save Cara. Not that Cara very well needed help! (Haha, I could picture Cara saying something like that.)

Go save Kahlan, Cara!

Great update!

[a1066]

I know everyone didn't want any Richard. But really, it was unavoidable, after all.

I really don't dislike Richard per say, in the tv show. I've never read the books for very important reasons, so I can't speak to that. But I guess the thing that bothers me about him is that he's obviously a wish-fulfillment character for the expected target demographic of 13 year old straight boys. But, if he weren't all in love with Kahlan and stealing her from my pretty Cara, I think Richard and I could be alright with each other.

[chaotic_fuse81]

I agree. I find him too "perfect", it's ridiculous. But if it weren't for the whole R/K thing, I'd like him alright.

[a1066]

Exactly! He gets to be Seeker, he's also like a super duper wizard and the emperor of d'hara and he has a super hot girlfriend that is absolutely love sick over him.

The only thing he can't do is freaking cure cancer!

[jolo_65]

Awesome update......Denna Denna Denna...will she ever learn not to mess with Cara, especially by using Kahlan????

Looks like Cara is going to have to go all ConDar on all her old gang....

Thx for updating...looking forward to the next update!!

[a1066]

I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[orange_rocks1]

So glad to see an update, I'm loving this fic! Can't wait to see Cara go all badass and get her woman back. Great update!

[a1066]

Thanks. Hopefully the next update will be a bit more speedy

[e_quint]

Loved it!

I’ve been reading since you started despite my initial uncertainty (‘cause is such a different AU). But I have to say, it keeps getting better and better!!
Can’t wait for more!!
Just wanted to say that I was a little disappointed that Richard saved Cara... I mean, we’re talking about a badass Mord’Sith! I’m sure she would’ve been able to beat the crap out of Denna, kill the other Mord’Siths, hijack a plane, follow and rescue Kahlan. Before lunch.

Still loving every minute of it! Great storytelling!

[a1066]

I'm glad that you gave it a try. I have heard from a lot of people that they are uncertain about AUs, but its great to hear that you like it anyway :)

I anticipated a little unhappiness with the Richard move, but really, he had to come back for story purposes. Hopefully later events will make up for this one.

[mayireadtoday]

I love Kahlan with her rifle trying to provide cover.

Awesome: "Never let yourself get executed by an ex, that was one of Cara’s mottos."

Hilarious: “There was a kitten stuck in a tree. That’s why we got delayed.”

“I sure fucking hope you’re joking,”

Go get her, Cara!

I love Richard in his -- he's so cute. He needs someone.

[a1066]

Finally, someone who likes Richard!

Thanks :)