it's interesting~ ^^ I'm just confused with the Point of views. Next time, indicate if it is Min's or Kyu's POV. ^^ and a little beta, "Ehm … we … we’re kissing today." I think it should be "We kissed today." I thought they were actually kissing on that time Jieun was having a convo with Min XD
sorry for that~~ It just made me confused... FIGHTING unnie!!!!
okay, will do that in the next chapter ah ... i'm sorry then >< my grammar is truly worst =___= next time, i'll ask my unnie to beta my fic thanks for reading ayen ;))
*ps: why are you calling me unnie? i'm 93liner btw ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
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will try to update it soon
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sorry for that~~ It just made me confused... FIGHTING unnie!!!!
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ah ... i'm sorry then ><
my grammar is truly worst =___=
next time, i'll ask my unnie to beta my fic
thanks for reading ayen ;))
*ps: why are you calling me unnie? i'm 93liner btw ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
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