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ayeengie August 27 2011, 00:32:41 UTC
So this is your 2nd fic?

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a101203 August 27 2011, 02:56:19 UTC
yes ^___^

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ayeengie August 27 2011, 12:01:33 UTC
it's interesting~ ^^ I'm just confused with the Point of views. Next time, indicate if it is Min's or Kyu's POV. ^^ and a little beta, "Ehm … we … we’re kissing today." I think it should be "We kissed today." I thought they were actually kissing on that time Jieun was having a convo with Min XD

sorry for that~~ It just made me confused... FIGHTING unnie!!!!

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a101203 August 27 2011, 15:38:33 UTC
okay, will do that in the next chapter
ah ... i'm sorry then ><
my grammar is truly worst =___=
next time, i'll ask my unnie to beta my fic
thanks for reading ayen ;))

*ps: why are you calling me unnie? i'm 93liner btw ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

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ayeengie August 28 2011, 05:43:42 UTC
it's alright! We all make mistakes! ^^

--I'm a 94 liner ^^

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a101203 August 28 2011, 05:59:31 UTC
really? 0______0
but i think, you're older than me
*feel like an old person again T___T

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