fic: say goodnight and goodbye -- doctor who

[_thirty2flavors]

Title: Say Goodnight and Goodbye
Rating: PG
Spoilers?: Through 4x13.
Characters/Pairings: Donna, Ten2(/Rose/Ten)
Summary: (Set during Journey's End.) The Doctor-Donna has just saved the whole of creation -- that calls for drinks, and she is not going to allow a part-human part-Time Lord to ruin the moment by brooding.
Excerpt:For the first time,

Comments

[syzygy_lj]

Now and forever, the two Doctors will be "Thing One" and "Thing Two" in my head.

This was great. I loved it! Good work!

[_thirty2flavors]

Hahaha I was pretty fond of those nicknames myself.

Thanks!

[torn_eledhwen]

That was delightful, with perfect Donna. I agree they definitely had a party before going back.

[_thirty2flavors]

Yeah it seems totally lame to waste the "omg the TARDIS is full, one big happy family, whoo!" opportunity by just taking everyone home. Psh. Offscreen party is totally in my canon, lol.

Thanks!

[harpinred]

I loved this so much. It was wonderful and bittersweet at the same time. I could just see Donna having this talk with the Blue/Doctor to make him see straight. Lord, I'm going to miss Donna!

Great job!

[_thirty2flavors]

I'll miss Donna too. D: It seemed like a situation that needed discussing and Donna seemed like the most natural choice to discuss it.

Thanks!

[sweetcherrytree]

Aw, Kali. This was really nice and like everyone else has already said, I think that the DoctorDonna/OtherDoctor connection was hilarious and brilliant and I wish it had been further demonstrated and explored. It was also nice how you showed that Donna and the Other Doctor anticipated Rose's reluctance and all of the issues facing the Ten/Ten2/Rose situation.

I could tell that you struggled with Donna because damn, she really is hard to write, and reading dialogue is simply not the same as hearing/watching Catherine Tate kind of do her spin-on-things. BUT kudos to you 'cause you did pretty well, mate. It was also fun to see you make up space/science shit LIRL. WELL DONE ON THAT FRONT. WORLD OF SCI-FI, HERE COMES KALI.

Now give me a professional author response, dammit, because I gave you a review-ish thing with only one LIRL. You failed me the last time, DO NOT FAIL ME AGAIN!

[_thirty2flavors]

Yeaaah I figured I'd give them the benefit of the doubt and asume that they knew Rose wasn't going to be too pleased with how things turned out -- at least not at first -- but, you know, because it's the Doctor they do it anyway. (Plus it does make the most sense

[sweetcherrytree]

YES I AM VERY PLEASED WITH YOUR PERFORMANCE. YOU MAY REVERT BACK TO THE LAWLZ.

[lviboheme]

This is gorgeous. Leave it to Donna (and well, obviously you) to make it better.

[_thirty2flavors]

Thank you! I figured Donna might as well be the voice of reason, lol.