drabble: should have beens

[_thirty2flavors]

I am on some kind of hideous writing kick. It is simultaneously entertaining (for me) and pathetic (because I am a sad, sad person with no life).

On that note I think I need to put some kind of drabble-collection-thing on UR, but I can't think of a good title. Boourns.

Anyway, yeah. This one didn't turn out quite the way I wanted. Damn.

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[latine]

You have no idea how much this makes me *squee*. GO INSPIRATION!

What I liked about this is how you picked a very commonly used theme and wrote something about it, and made it non-cliché. I really lik ehow you ended too :)

About the title thing, GAH. Same thing happens to me all the time. I have absolutely no idea what titles to give to my stories. Someone should write an essay about that or something.

[_thirty2flavors]

WHOO Go inspiration indeed. Sharon why am I always inspired when I have no TIME to write? WHY? WHYY!!!

I am a bit of a sucker for doing that, the cliche-turned-not-cliche thing. Eheh. And yes, I really just wrote it because I wanted to use the last line. Haha. I am lame like that, I think up ending lines and then have to write an entire fic just to get to that point.

I still haven't come up with a good title. DAMN YOU, TITLES.

[mari_grem]

Oh that's so terribly painful, yet remains so beautiful all the while. I don't know how Sirius was able to go on after losing so many people he cared about, after being betrayed and losing all the family he ever knew.
But then, it was probably worse for Remus.
Beautiful, my dear, absolutely beautiful.
Oh, and thanks for recommending me over at Unforgiveable Room. I'm so glad you liked my story that much.

[_thirty2flavors]

Mmm, it sucks for both of them. Sirius' losses seem sort of drawn out while Remus' occur all at once. I've always sort of figured James got it the easiest of all, dying and not having to deal with it. Haha.

=) Thank you.

And no problem; it was a very good fic.