burnt at the edges. lost at the seems.

Feb 01, 2004 20:20

Im so happy i just might choke ( Read more... )

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vivalasadgirls February 1 2004, 20:29:23 UTC
wow.
im stuned.

your such a great writer.

i want you to keep a book.

ill fo sho publish it.

that poem took my breath away.

just like your wonderful smile.

thank for being such a great friend i had a good weekend hanging out with you.

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I LOVE UUUUUUUUUUUUUXMILLION eyelineryou February 1 2004, 20:44:21 UTC
pwsha

yer my ch'ch'

im glad u liked this poem...i wasnt sure about it. since i wrote it so long ago.

thank you babe!

i hope u actually think those things.

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wholy shit. howiwishiwasnt February 1 2004, 20:34:46 UTC
almost like one bad wreck
a whole day dedicated to the breaking of forget.
everyday is a new disaster
on the bridge of shattering shadows faster

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Re: wholy shit. eyelineryou February 1 2004, 20:44:43 UTC
"WHOLY"

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Re: eyelineryou February 1 2004, 20:45:25 UTC
yay yay yay

I LOVE YOU LIVVI

i want to thank you a million times.

but, i cant write that much. sorry

here my best shot: thankyouxmillion.

:MUAW:

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Re: eyelineryou February 2 2004, 13:15:14 UTC
oh bitch.
ILOVEOYUXINFINITY

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the_rockstarr February 1 2004, 20:51:21 UTC
pure.fucking.amazing.

choke me with your touch, then kiss my dead lips and smile.

love prevails over all
you struck gold,
and all i got was lost

wow, i dont even know wat to say
so good...

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wow eyelineryou February 2 2004, 13:16:09 UTC
aww no need for words.

thank you so so so much.

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_the_last February 1 2004, 21:01:20 UTC
i've seen this one before...

it's still as fucking brilliant as it was then.

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Re: loveatfirstsite February 1 2004, 21:06:22 UTC
^^^what they said^^^
wow...i wish i could write like that. I LOVE YOU

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Re: eyelineryou February 2 2004, 13:18:36 UTC
thank you so much lex!

your a wonderfull person and it makes yer comment makes me bubble.

LOVE YOU MUCH

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!!!!!!! eyelineryou February 2 2004, 13:17:35 UTC
im glad u remembered it.

yer one o those cool kids.

THANK YOU SO MUCH.

never stop commenting?!

u make me feel like one o those cool kids when u do.

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