The Neglected Virtue - Non-JRock, Kingdom Hearts II/358/2 Days, Axel/Roxas (Part II)

[_newworld]

Title: The Neglected Virtue
Author: Kagome
Prompt: “Veracity, or the habit of speaking the truth, is a virtue.” - Leslie Walker.
Warnings: language, angst, sarcasm, short-lived fluff, very vague allusions to sex, major, major spoilers for KH 358/2 Days, Chain of Memories, and KHII.
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Axel/Roxas
Disclaimer:

Comments

[nadjeschda]

*cries* ;____;

That was beautiful.... ♥

[_newworld]

Thank you so very much. <3333 ^_____^ I'm glad you liked it.

Your icon is making me smile goofily. XD

[nadjeschda]

Akuroku hurts in a good way ;_; *sobs* <3

Ah, yes *_* This is like my favorite picture of those two >_< They look so happy!

[_newworld]

*offers some tissues* Oh, gosh, I never expected to get such great reviews for this fic. I'm overjoyed that you liked it so much. Thank you!

[sleep_learning]

this was wonderful. i loved the whole thing, and the music fitted beautifully. (I'm totally not crying)... okay, maybe just a little bit. Okay, maybe a lot.

[_newworld]

*gives lots and lots of tissues*

Thank you so much; I'm glad you liked the read and that you believed the music fit well with what was going on. <33333

Again, thank you!

[diving_spree]

That is... that is so undeniably Akuroku. It's beautiful and makes me hurt bittersweetly.

It makes my eyes sting with tears. Kudos to you...

[_newworld]

*hugs and offers tissues* Thank you so much. I'm happy that you think this is beautiful, and in a way, I'm glad the tears are there too. I wanted this to be emotional, and it was. :) Thank you.

[bubblegumtotchi]

K so I waited to comment til I read the whole thing.

First... I are encouragement? Well, if this is the result... *ENCOURAGES MOAR* XD

*ahem* Anyway.... XD;

*wipes tears* You made me cry again, damn you.:P <33333333333333333333

I love this, darling. Srsly. (and not just cuz you used my very favoritest part :P) I love that it's from Axel's POV. I fell in love with him the very first time I saw him , and the way you write him is just so... perfect. *__*

[_newworld]

*cuddles and gives tissues* I'd say I'm sorry for the tears, but I wanted this to be very emotional, so for me, the tears are kind of good. It means that it was emotional.

Hee, what's your favoritest part? XD Andandand I love Axel too--I feel in love with his character from the beginning, and I wanted to show that even though, yeah, he lies to Roxas and thus betrays him, I don't think that really makes him a bad person. What other choice did he have, except to tell Roxas the truth and then possibly be eliminated because of it?

Thank you, honey. So glad you liked it. ^______^

And yes, you did encourage this. Remember when we were talking about 'Quote' and I said that the song made me think of AkuRoku, and you were all "WE HAVE FIC IN THE FUTURE?" XDXDXD So, there you go. <3333333333333

[bubblegumtotchi]

Oh don't apologize. The tears are a good thing. Means you did what you wanted. ^^

“You can’t turn your back on the Organization! Get on their bad side, and they’ll destroy you, Roxas!”

Roxas, who’s been walking away from him this whole time, stops, but doesn’t look back. “No-one would miss me,” he intones before he resumes walking.

The cards all fall to the ground in a scattered mess, and the thread snaps.

“That’s not true,” Axel murmurs, not believing that Roxas would say such a thing. “I would.”

That part. It gets me every time. I was like "AWWWWWWW! *SNIFF*" XD;; I agree. He's not a bad person at all. I got that from him, too. He was just... doing what he HAD to do. I cried in the game when he gave his life to help Sora. *dork* XD;;

OH YEAH! I remember that now! LOL I need to do that more often if it's gonna get results like this. :P <333333333333333333333

Edited cuz I PHAIL at coding. LOL