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Obedience - Ruki/Aoi/Uruha

Sep 09, 2007 13:37

Title: Obedience
Author: Kagome
Warnings: D/s, humiliation (sort of), flogging, sensory deprivation (in the form of a blindfold), use of a ball gag, use of a cockring, use of a vibrator.
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ruki/Aoi/Uruha (the GazettE)
Disclaimer: Standard disclaimer applies.
Summary: The greatest lesson that a pet can learn is to obey his ( Read more... )

rukixuruha, aoixuruha, the gazette, master and pets, rukixaoi, rukixaoixuruha

Comments 41

foxykittygirl September 9 2007, 18:37:59 UTC

has anyone told you that you are god lately? i just read all three parts of this (would you call it a series?) and i swear your writing style is one of the hottest i've read. I was totally sucked in by what was happening in the fic, i tell you no lie the phone began ringing and i didn't notice until someone tapped me and asked why didn't i get it. I would love it if you wrote more (shameless begging insert here) but if you do wanna stop this one does sound a bit more... final than the previous ones. and i'm reading everything you write from now on. i swear that was soooo hot it really made my week. i'm gonna be in bliss until next sunday from this.

_newworld September 9 2007, 18:44:51 UTC

Well, no, I can't say they have. *giggles and hugs you* Thank you so much! I remember with the second one, I was really nervous, cos sometimes I would get stuck and I wasn't sure what I should say next. With this one, it was easier, though I must say that Ruki wanted to do things that made me go "O_______O WHERE IS ALL OF THIS COMING FROM???" XDXDXDXD

There might be more, though I am not sure. I really don't have much time for writing right now, so we'll see. ^___^ I'm so happy this made your week. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

foxykittygirl September 9 2007, 19:03:52 UTC

no problem, it was my pleasure! when i read the second one it didn't seem like you had had any trouble writing it at all! it just all flowed together really nicely! i would have never know. i understand what you mean about not having much time... oh well if you get to it thats great but if you don't you have your reasons. i guess we'll see!
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_newworld September 10 2007, 20:35:26 UTC

Oh, thank you! ^____^ I'm glad that it didn't seem like I was having trouble, even though at times I was. XD And yes, we shall see~. Though I really am tempted to write more of this threesome. ^.^ It's all a matter of time and ideas. Right now I'm working on Reita/Aoi/Miyavi. ^_^

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_newworld September 9 2007, 21:50:51 UTC

*blush* Well, I suppose I can say that this fic was successful, then. XDXDXDXD

*revives you* Thank you for reading! ^______^ I am happy that you enjoyed~! *snuggles up to you*

My Kai muse is hiding from me, I think. ._. Mayhaps he is cross with me. *sigh*

liangzhu September 9 2007, 21:18:44 UTC

Yay! Yay! I will see if I can use this as the metaphorical carrot to get me to finish... any of my WIPs before reading it.

Yes, I will fail. >.>

But I'll try!

*uses decidedly un-RAWR!dom Ruki icon*

_newworld September 9 2007, 21:51:38 UTC

*waves pom-poms* You can do it, you can do it~!!! ^_____^

Hee! I love that icon! XD

golden_kimono September 9 2007, 21:29:52 UTC

This was.. too hot for words. XD So, yeah, I have no words. >.> I always love your fics, though. <3 And you even manage to make me read pairings I normally wouldn't. :P

_newworld September 9 2007, 21:52:09 UTC

*grins* Thank you~! I'm happy that you enjoyed it. XD

Part 1 l33t_dreams September 9 2007, 22:40:27 UTC

Oh, man, it seems like I haven't read smut for a long time. And this.....is going to be so good, I can tell by the warnings and summary. I need some RAWR!dom!Ruki BAD.

There is just a hint of anxiety in his eyes, and it’s been a while since Ruki’s seen that look in Uruha’s eyes. He has missed it.
*low evil chuckle* OMG I can't wait.

and yes, he had made Aoi beg to be fucked yet again
Uuunnn...Was this in one of the prequels to this? Did I miss it? I will so be going back and reading them.

“So,” Aoi says,
There is so much attitude loaded into that single word. (at least the way that I'm reading it)

Ruki knows quite well that Aoi does not like to be called his pet, which only makes Ruki want to call Aoi his pet more often.
I didn't really think it was possible for me to lust after dom!Ruki more, but I guess it is. XD

Ruki can now see the barely-concealed anger in Aoi’s eyes. “Yes, Ruki-sama,” he practically snarls.
I can only hope I love your Uruha as much as I'm loving your Ruki and Aoi. <3

“Because if you so much as whisper ( ... )

Re: Part 1 _newworld September 10 2007, 20:55:36 UTC

OOOOH LONG COMMENTS! I FEEL SO SPECIAL! *weeps tears of joy* XD

I do hope I fulfilled your need for RAWR!DOM!Ruki. ^______^

Uuunnn...Was this in one of the prequels to this? Did I miss it? I will so be going back and reading them.

It was, indeed. I think you've read 'Giving In'. The part where Ruki fucks Aoi (quite mercilessly) is in 'Punishments and Rewards' (he does other stuff to Aoi too, like flog him. XD).

There is so much attitude loaded into that single word. (at least the way that I'm reading it)

Aoi has an attitude problem. *laughs* Seriously, he tries to resist and he tries to be all GRR GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME but it doesn't quite work. And it only turns Ruki on more when he tries to 'get away', so to speak.

I didn't really think it was possible for me to lust after dom!Ruki more, but I guess it is. XD

Dom!Ruki: *feels special* Now, on your knees. The better to worship me.

........ He's still high from his power trip. XD

I can only hope I love your Uruha as much as I'm loving your Ruki and Aoi ( ... )