Obedience - Ruki/Aoi/Uruha

Sep 09, 2007 13:37

Title: Obedience
Author: Kagome
Warnings: D/s, humiliation (sort of), flogging, sensory deprivation (in the form of a blindfold), use of a ball gag, use of a cockring, use of a vibrator.
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ruki/Aoi/Uruha (the GazettE)
Disclaimer: Standard disclaimer applies.
Summary: The greatest lesson that a pet can learn is to obey his ( Read more... )

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Part 1 l33t_dreams September 9 2007, 22:40:27 UTC
Oh, man, it seems like I haven't read smut for a long time. And this.....is going to be so good, I can tell by the warnings and summary. I need some RAWR!dom!Ruki BAD.

There is just a hint of anxiety in his eyes, and it’s been a while since Ruki’s seen that look in Uruha’s eyes. He has missed it.
*low evil chuckle* OMG I can't wait.

and yes, he had made Aoi beg to be fucked yet again
Uuunnn...Was this in one of the prequels to this? Did I miss it? I will so be going back and reading them.

“So,” Aoi says,
There is so much attitude loaded into that single word. (at least the way that I'm reading it)

Ruki knows quite well that Aoi does not like to be called his pet, which only makes Ruki want to call Aoi his pet more often.
I didn't really think it was possible for me to lust after dom!Ruki more, but I guess it is. XD

Ruki can now see the barely-concealed anger in Aoi’s eyes. “Yes, Ruki-sama,” he practically snarls.
I can only hope I love your Uruha as much as I'm loving your Ruki and Aoi. <3

“Because if you so much as whisper any other word besides the words that I have given you permission to say, you will be gagged, and you won’t be able to speak at all.”
;alksjfopwieajs;lkfn. I am way to smut deprived to be reading this. I should have started with cracksmut and worked my way up.

Perhaps the sex has gone to your head,
BEST PHRASE EVER.

“Master.” There is pleading in Uruha’s voice and there is something resembling panic in his voice as well. He is trembling and he is shaking his head, hands no longer flat on the floor, but balled into fists, knuckles white. “Please, Master,” he whispers, voice breaking. “Not this. Please.”

URUHA, NO~!!!!!!!! OMGOMGOMG. Okay, flailing and franticness aside, this paragraph painted a beautiful picture. I actually pictured it in anime form, and then spaced for a minute imagining this whole thing as an anime, and WOW do I want to see that. *wishes I could draw*

“Keep hesitating and I’ll introduce you to my riding crop.”
*drools* Angry Ruki....is going to make me need to take a shower after reading this.

“Anything else you want me to fetch?” Aoi asks, voice unsurprisingly thick with sarcasm.
How much longer is Ruki going to tolerate that!?!

This is the last warning I will give you about that pretty mouth of yours, Aoi.
Oh. :D

“Fuck yourself,”
a;lskjfowiehjaosjnf;asliea8w9eh. People watching other people masturbate/fuck themselves is such a kink of mine. And watching a blindfolded/gagged Uruha do it? a;lsifjpowahfpoishp0a8wu4f0a34uaosf!!!

you’ll get ten lashes. I don’t mean with that flogger, either. I mean with the riding crop.
*pales* 10 with the crop?! O_O

Your description of Uruha is pretty much just as I pictured it. And yes, a collar would have been icing on the cake.

“Don’t be so silly, pet. You’ll wear your collar when I tell you to wear it.”
Eeeeee! <3333333333333333333

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Re: Part 1 _newworld September 10 2007, 20:55:36 UTC
OOOOH LONG COMMENTS! I FEEL SO SPECIAL! *weeps tears of joy* XD

I do hope I fulfilled your need for RAWR!DOM!Ruki. ^______^

Uuunnn...Was this in one of the prequels to this? Did I miss it? I will so be going back and reading them.

It was, indeed. I think you've read 'Giving In'. The part where Ruki fucks Aoi (quite mercilessly) is in 'Punishments and Rewards' (he does other stuff to Aoi too, like flog him. XD).

There is so much attitude loaded into that single word. (at least the way that I'm reading it)

Aoi has an attitude problem. *laughs* Seriously, he tries to resist and he tries to be all GRR GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME but it doesn't quite work. And it only turns Ruki on more when he tries to 'get away', so to speak.

I didn't really think it was possible for me to lust after dom!Ruki more, but I guess it is. XD

Dom!Ruki: *feels special* Now, on your knees. The better to worship me.

........ He's still high from his power trip. XD

I can only hope I love your Uruha as much as I'm loving your Ruki and Aoi. <3

*whisper* Do you love him~~~~? ^_^

;alksjfopwieajs;lkfn. I am way to smut deprived to be reading this. I should have started with cracksmut and worked my way up.

Well, it's too late now, isn't it~~? :P

BEST PHRASE EVER.

It just seemed so incredibly Ruki. XD

URUHA, NO~!!!!!!!! OMGOMGOMG. Okay, flailing and franticness aside, this paragraph painted a beautiful picture. I actually pictured it in anime form, and then spaced for a minute imagining this whole thing as an anime, and WOW do I want to see that. *wishes I could draw*

*takes a moment to imagine it* Oh, yes, I'd like to see that too. *fans self*

*drools* Angry Ruki....is going to make me need to take a shower after reading this.

*feels special again* Or maybe all credit for that should just go to dom!Ruki. Because, seriously, who wouldn't need a shower after encountering dom!Ruki? XDXDXDXD

How much longer is Ruki going to tolerate that!?!

Surprisingly, he put up with quite a lot from Aoi. I think it was because he was so much more focused on Uruha's punishment. But he did make it clear where he drew the line, at least. ^.^

a;lskjfowiehjaosjnf;asliea8w9eh. People watching other people masturbate/fuck themselves is such a kink of mine. And watching a blindfolded/gagged Uruha do it? a;lsifjpowahfpoishp0a8wu4f0a34uaosf!!!

*offers to fan you too* I couldn't help myself. It was just so tempting to write, even though when I was writing it, I was like, "OKAY WHAT DO I DO NOW??? *mild panic*" *LOL*

*pales* 10 with the crop?! O_O

It isn't my fault. *hides* Really, I was going to put three, and Ruki-muse was like, "ten!" and so I said "five?" "NO! TEN! I MEAN IT!" "Eeep. Okay!"

UberDom!Ruki = serious business, yo. XD

Your description of Uruha is pretty much just as I pictured it. And yes, a collar would have been icing on the cake.

Ruki has informed me that he wants collars on both of them next time. >_> Next time. God. He's trying to kill me.

Eeeeee! <3333333333333333333

^_________^

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