Comments | _melodic_: Giving In (Teddy/James Sirius; NC-17)

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Giving In (Teddy/James Sirius; NC-17)

Nov 19, 2016 07:02

Title: Giving In
Author: _melodic_
Pairing: Teddy/James Sirius
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Content: First Times. Anal Fingering. Anal Sex. Dirty Talk. Mild Come Play.
Word Count: ~2040
Summary: When Teddy left the country after James finally summoned the courage to confess his feelings, James was left heartbroken. Now Teddy's back and James is determined to get ( Read more... )

fiction, contains: anal fingering, genre: smut, pairing: teddy/james sirius, slash, contains: pining, harry potter, era: post hogwarts, contains: anal sex, contains: dirty talk, contains: first time, genre: hurt/comfort, rating: nc-17, genre: fluff

Comments 10

lq_traintracks November 19 2016, 16:28:18 UTC

Oh! So very sweet and HOT! I adore the pining and the possessiveness and wow that was some hot smut! Happy birthday Grace indeed!

(Also, was I Obliviated after some meeting we all had where we decided Grace would get a bunch of Teddy/James this year?? LOL!)

_melodic_ November 19 2016, 17:22:23 UTC

Aw thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it :D

Haha, I know! I think I must have been obliviated as well~ XD

gracerene November 19 2016, 19:57:55 UTC

Mel! You beautiful, beautiful human being! Oh my goodness, this is just amazing ( ... )

_melodic_ November 19 2016, 23:09:20 UTC

Hiiii Grace! Happy Birthday!! <333

I'm so glad you liked my A/N... hehe I kind of went off there but, well, I do tend to get a bit long winded from time to time, as you well know.

I'm so pleased I was able to hit so many of your likes and that they satisfied you and one of your top favourite pairings.

I love Teddy with dark, navy hair--I'm so happy you liked that detail as well.

I hope you had a wonderful day and I am overjoyed that you liked your gift. <333

capitu November 19 2016, 21:16:43 UTC

God, oh god.

You know how much I love this. This is so hot and intense and there are so many emotions. The way James challenges Teddy and Teddy's just ready to give in, to take, and he does, and it's smoking hot and delicious. AHhhhhh, so good!!

_melodic_ November 19 2016, 23:13:31 UTC

Thank you friend!!

I am so happy you enjoyed it so much, even reading it for a second time.

Thank you again for your help with this story!! <333

sabethea November 20 2016, 10:49:21 UTC

Oh oh oh.

You may have to wait a while whilst I remember how to word again...

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okay. Wow. This is fucking gorgeous, with a possessive Teddy and a needy James, and oh yes. The slight guilt about their 'relationship' and whether they count as brothers, but the fact that they can't stay away. Teddy's hair, and "What if I want to break you?" and James's answer.

I can die happy now.

_melodic_ November 20 2016, 15:18:32 UTC

Ahhhhh!!

What a lovely comment! I am over the moon you liked this so much! :D

Hehe I am so glad you liked that "break you" comment as I super enjoyed writing that part ;]

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment !!

<333

carpemermaid November 20 2016, 15:38:46 UTC

Oh god that was so hot! Gaaaah I loved James being all bold and claiming he didn't wait around, and then Teddy getting all jealous and possesive and growly. And then demanding to know who it was, until James couldn't help but admit he did wait after all. *melts* And Teddy wanting to come on James to mark him as his *dies*!!!! I also adored this line: Teddy tastes like the sun, bright and feverish and James moans into his mouth