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[_jezza]

Day 1 -I woke up to the sounds of distant ambulance sirens and repetitive medical equipment pulses, beeps, and chimes. My eyes opened unhurried, my vision blurry. The sensitivity to the light hurts my head. Rubbing and adjusting my eyes. I was rested on a hospital bed, perfectly covered and tucked in to blankets and sheets. I spotted a nurse,

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[scoopnav]

wow. while i was reading this, i felt like i was a ghost in the same room. like, the picture that you painted of everything going on was extreamly detailed and realistic - so much so that i felt like i was there. incredible!

maybe what is scarrier than how well you described this, is the fact that i've actually had dreams like this where i wake up in a hospital and i cant move/speak, etc, and have no clue what is going on.

good stuff though! cant wait for day 2!