Hotch/Emily // Fic // 2000 Miles (1/3)

[elekanahmen]

Emily zipped up her rarely worn jeans that she kept in her ready bag. They’d wrapped up their case in Phoenix the night before, complete with a spectacular Morgan tackle launched across the room at the unsub who’d just blown up the police cruiser that he thought a key witness was in. To his dismay, it was an empty dummy but the explosion had left

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[maekala]

I have to admit: playful Hotch is very cute. Especially when he's being playful with Emily. And as much as I think navel rings are for rich bitches who wear pink or emo goth kids, the tattoo and other piercing more than make up for it.

For the record? You're still a traitor. Especially since you now have me going through some of the backlog on hotch_prentiss and *occasionally* finding stuff that's not that bad. I stress "occasionally."

[elekanahmen]

i've been doing the same thing lately. i can't remember what i did in my guilty days of "I'M NOT READING HOTCHILY STFU" meanwhile secretly trolling through hotch_prentiss

I adore absolutely everything mcgarrygirl78 writes and also hopskotch_hotch.

Shit, mcgarrygirl78 can make me want to read rossi/prentiss and gideon/prentiss because her writing is SO good.

[maekala]

I totally saw the fics where mcgarrygirl78 listed Hotch/Prentiss and Gideon/Prentiss and was all, "oh! Threesome? Please?" Which is sad because I've never considered Gideon/Prentiss, but threesome fics make me happy. Like, adorkably happy.

[elekanahmen]

threesomes are on my list of things to conquer in cowriting with her.

[mcgarrygirl78]

Made of win.....but you knew that.

Look forward to more, you really fleshed this out and made it more beautiful. I love these two.

[elekanahmen]

Come on, I'm a JJ/Emily shipper at heart. If there's anything I'm good at it's grabbing the subtext and bleeding it. Reading between the lines (in this case, literally) is what I do.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Montiese. You and Hopskotch are the two to please in this corner of the fandom, for me ♥

[mcgarrygirl78]

I do loved to be pleased, especially with my ship.

But I love your OTP too and cant wait to read more of their romance.

There is so much between the lines, isn't there?

[elekanahmen]

Frankly, and I think it has a lot to do with what kind of person Emily is, I can see a lot of subtext between her and most of the characters.. but most especially Hotch, JJ and Jordan. I can see a bit of Reid (which I've played up with gubabies in a bit of a toss around) And obviously you see gideon and rossi... and there's even something there with Mogan at times... it's amazing, isn't it? How one character can have such chemistry with everyone...

[hopskotch_hotch]

You guys are doing RP seven nights a week if this is what comes from it - no ifs, no buts (hee! butts! :P), you just are! *puts foot down*

The dialogue caught me from the start - it's so real, so well-paced. When I can hear them talking as I read, I know I'm not going nuts, it's a good sign!! *nods*

Poor Hotch, gettin' all worked up about Emily's tattoo and piercings - haha, I swear, the image of him trying to cool off in front of a refrigerator will stay with me! I love how Emily's inherent sexiness causes him to almost lose it, turns him into a dithering idiot.

Also loved Emily taking control, and revealing little things about herself, like smoking cloves. It's always small touches that make a fic.

Oooh you write so well, you do!!

I want more missy - I want to see where this road trip takes them, captured in your style!!!

[elekanahmen]

oh i have two more parts and i'm seriously considering a sequel.

YOU TELL THAT TO MONTIESE, OKAY? I WOULD LOVE TO RP WITH HER SEVEN NIGHTS A WEEK AND TURN IT INTO EPIC RP BASED FICTION. MMK? SHE'S THE ONE WITH THE "i don't want to get addicted" business.

[hopskotch_hotch]

More, MOAR!!!

I get aggressive when it comes to me fic :P

Heh, if you can't convince her, surely I can't ;) Plus, she's booked for Gideon/Prentiss with me - whoops, I'd forgotten that when I was demanding seven nights!

[elekanahmen]

we're gonna be running the poor girl ragged

but that's okay

you know she'll enjoy it

[elekanahmen]

HEY

i never said i didn't want paget

WE WILL MAKE HER CHOOSE

(oh hai, she thinks i'm a doll already, i have a leg up on that one ;))

[abilena]

So I'm reading this because of the voting thing and you're the writer. I like it. If I were in Hotch's place I would have needed to stand in front of a cooler too...Emily with a tatoo, nipple ring, and belly ring = HOT n SEXY. Off to read part two.

P.S. you're not the only girl scout to never do pervuted shennanigans with other girl scouts :)