Hotch/Emily // Fic // 2000 Miles (1/3)
Emily zipped up her rarely worn jeans that she kept in her ready bag. They’d wrapped up their case in Phoenix the night before, complete with a spectacular Morgan tackle launched across the room at the unsub who’d just blown up the police cruiser that he thought a key witness was in. To his dismay, it was an empty dummy but the explosion had left
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The dialogue caught me from the start - it's so real, so well-paced. When I can hear them talking as I read, I know I'm not going nuts, it's a good sign!! *nods*
Poor Hotch, gettin' all worked up about Emily's tattoo and piercings - haha, I swear, the image of him trying to cool off in front of a refrigerator will stay with me! I love how Emily's inherent sexiness causes him to almost lose it, turns him into a dithering idiot.
Also loved Emily taking control, and revealing little things about herself, like smoking cloves. It's always small touches that make a fic.
Oooh you write so well, you do!!
I want more missy - I want to see where this road trip takes them, captured in your style!!!
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YOU TELL THAT TO MONTIESE, OKAY? I WOULD LOVE TO RP WITH HER SEVEN NIGHTS A WEEK AND TURN IT INTO EPIC RP BASED FICTION. MMK? SHE'S THE ONE WITH THE "i don't want to get addicted" business.
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I get aggressive when it comes to me fic :P
Heh, if you can't convince her, surely I can't ;) Plus, she's booked for Gideon/Prentiss with me - whoops, I'd forgotten that when I was demanding seven nights!
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but that's okay
you know she'll enjoy it
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