A Dawn of Dreams

Mar 06, 2022 21:37


A fresh pot of coffee brewing. A cigarette slowly burning, the smoke billowing into oblivion. I am free. The blue pallet of the morning sky brightens as the universe turns up the contrast on the television showing today's episode. The characters are all starting to get into their roles. Action. Birds chirp. Cats scurry by from car to car looking ( Read more... )

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ickxx March 15 2022, 03:13:25 UTC

I can't get enough of this

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_closingtime_ March 15 2022, 12:37:58 UTC

I'm not sure if I want to finish this or leave it where it's at...

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ickxx March 15 2022, 13:01:10 UTC

I think you should leave it. Honestly, I even made my partner read this and he was so moved

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_closingtime_ March 15 2022, 16:37:12 UTC

Awe really?! 🖤 that's making my face hurt right now :) yeah I wrote it not too long ago maybe a couple weeks ago after just meeting this person. Just one of those extremely rare people that when you meet for the first time it feels as if you've known them for lifetimes. I mean it'd really only happen twice maybe thrice, in my life. But just happened the other day.

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ickxx March 15 2022, 17:07:23 UTC

I know the feeling you're talking about ♡
I'm just happy I was able to read about the experience through you and share it with someone close to me.
You're an incredible writer.

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_closingtime_ March 15 2022, 20:23:26 UTC

Now that's probably the best compliment I could receive. Haha thank you. For real that actually means a lot for you to share that with him. Sure I write for me, but I hope it, in turn, can spark a thought or vision in someone else. To source an experience?! Well that's just blushworthy. And it's hard to make a ginger blush haha
Again, thank you. I'm not as good at writing as I am just thinking about things and finding the right words to try and describe the thoughts in my head. In my opinion anyone and everyone can be a good writer. We all think shit and have experiences, I'm just bored or inspired enough to take the time to pick words like writing a screenplay to a movie after you've watched it without sound.

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ickxx March 15 2022, 20:32:15 UTC

Haha i think you're being humble. Having the vocabulary and the thoughts is one thing, but choosing the right words to sequence together is a gift.
I'll try to make you blush more often, sounds like a challenge.

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_closingtime_ March 16 2022, 12:14:41 UTC

I am being humble. I have to be. Go back to 2010 KC and you'll see an unchecked ego and that led to multiple overdoses, rampages, and fuckery hahaha I'm slightkybkidding but I di believe it about the writing. Especially with people such as yourself whos mind I can tell is capable of anything. The depth and the brilliance, the wealth of intellect and range of experience, your mind is just as intriguing to me as anyone's. Probably why we're still here talking to each other. And probably why if anyone were to make a ginger blush it'd be you. At least you'd make a few more freckles pop out.

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