Comments | _beetle_: Fic: "Just One More Time," Inception, Cobb/Nash, NC-17

_beetle_

Fic: "Just One More Time," Inception, Cobb/Nash, NC-17

Jan 30, 2011 07:28

I've got other shit to do. I have to stop looking at the kink meme and learn to prioritize.

Just One More Time
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nash, inception, cobb, inception_kink, cobb/nash

Comments 4

kirstenlouise January 30 2011, 15:59:16 UTC

BRB, BUNK FOREVER.

This was ridiculously, soul-scorchingly hot. Like, I love that you took this prompt and didn't make it into a crack fic (even though I like crack) and instead included a whole slew of things guaranteed to turn me into an incoherent mess: Nash being so fucked he doesn't think he can take anymore, him being all sticky and sloppy with come, dry orgasms... OH GOD, I THINK I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU. ;_;

I feel like I'm going to the special hell for all the lines I liked in this, but since I'm pretty sure you'll be there too, I think I'll go ahead and quote them:

“Jesus Christ, you’re like the world’s most literate date rapist!”

I loled. I felt bad, but I did. Then I laughed again. NEVER CHANGE, NASH. NEVER CHANGE.

"I know you kept fucking me after I passed out.”

...that is disturbingly hot. I--I would read that, for sure. But even just the mention of it has me clutching white-knuckled at my laptop, which surely can't be good for it.

Fuck, this was hot. And it was funny, too. Their voices are just great in this and it ( ... )

missis_norris January 30 2011, 16:21:30 UTC

JESUS CHRIST!
THAT WAS SO HOT!

forgerness January 30 2011, 18:08:32 UTC

Wow, this was so different than expected from the prompt. I thought it would be cracky or something, but this, to me, was actually a bit creepy. Nash takes it, but Cobb's attitude is what makes it really creepy. Especially here:

“I meant get off me, jerk! I said no, and I meant it!”

“And I said yes.”

“No.” Nash sighs when Dom nods yes, pushing at Dom’s chest again, for-real annoyed, this time. “Damnit, Dominic-“

Dom tackles Nash to the bed, pinning Nash’s body with his own, and Nash’s hands with his own. All without breaking gazes.

“Yes,” he says lowly, leaning in to lick a stripe up Nash’s throat.I loved the interactions between them. Your Cobb is so powerful and controlling. It's just that Cobb will never take no for an answer, and it's not really rape, but it's like Cobb forces Nash to say yes or take it. I feel bad for Nash here ( ... )

vinniebatman February 24 2011, 20:14:53 UTC

Holy giant penis, Beetman!

That was so dirty, and there was something kinda dark in Dom as well. But now we know why Nash betrayed them: his poor ass needed a break.

Very nicely done, my dear.

~Alice~